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Callisto


Applejack is best pony~~

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Moak #1 · Dec 26th, 2012 · · 10 ·

First? Meh... I'll read soon. :twilightsmile:
For now.. I have BACON TO EAT :pinkiehappy:

Edit- Now that I've gone and read the story.
Yay! Nice job Callisto, I really enjoyed it. I'm quite a sucker for Appledash which, is what interested me in the first place.
Done nicely, good story and a nice read.
Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

That was hot

those blue wings Hehehe... :rainbowdetermined2:
Also, I noticed a typo "...clasped it with her hood..." I think you meant "hoof"
As for the story itself, that was awesome! And I bet Rat loved it :ajsmug:
In other news, this is kinda freaky for me. I drew AJ being sick the a while ago with Dash taking care of her... and Dash ended up getting sick and AJ, in turn, taking care of her.... If the universe is listening... I have no idea how to react :rainbowderp:

Finally! Another story!

Just about the best Christmas surprise I could ask for! Seriously, I've hardly ever, if at all, come across an author of any stripe who does intimacy and affection as well as you do, Callisto. Many people write ponies, many people write naughty ponies, but you're the best out of the heaps I've seen at making it real. Any story or drabble you write becomes something for me to cherish within this fandom. Thank you so much, you wonderful genius wordsmith you. And merry Christmas, too. :rainbowkiss:

That ending was perfect

A new Callitso story?

A NEW CALLITSO STORY!

Forget everything else. Nothing I've planned today can be as important as this.

Edit: Well, I can say with absolute certainty that I was expecting perfection, and you've delivered with outstanding success.

I love it. It was short, sweet, sexy, and ridiculously fulfilling. That Rat is one lucky fellow.

1858287 I will be the first to upvote you're comment just for one thing.

Bacon.

Try to keep the "FIRST" comments to actual reviews next time mate. You might get banned if you don't.

WHOO!!! APPLEDASH!!! Will read at a later time!

1859185
Ya see, I was going to read it, then got called out to go and eat bacon for breakfast... as hard as it was, I chose bacon over this.
If I post a comment on a story before I've read it then I go and post another comment or edit the original one to give feedback.
However, thanks for the upvote for bacons :rainbowwild: Tis' delicious.

Oh, I love it! Such sweet writing <3 Just remember children: when you're sick you need to rest...and not have sex.:twilightsheepish:

I'm sorry but how many times do they bite there lips in a day?And the hole whimpering thing was used way to much.But this was very good makes you want to keep reading and not feel your doing bad thing's.

now im full of envy :flutterrage:

great job :twilightsmile:

Wheee! I love it :pinkiehappy:

I love this couple so much!:ajsmug::heart::rainbowhuh:

It's a nice story. It's not quite as good as Stuck, but still a great effort.

Very sensual, I loved it.:heart: Well done!

Hey, nice to see another from you. And more romantic and less fetishy too.
Of course I could complain about rain not giving people viruses and colds not usually being contagious once symptoms are in full effect.

1862142
That's mostly true. Still, the belief that being cold will give a cold is widespread, Applejack could definitely be thought to believe suchly. Rainbow could also have been very hypothermic, making her susceptible to infection. Lastly, it is true that colds are generally more contagious before fulminant onset, but it does not mean transmission of pathogens is impossible (the coughing and sneezing is an excellent way for aerosol spread of viruses.)

I think the most important thing to remember is for not to try this at home, kids. When you're sick, you're sick, and should rest. Not have too much sex! (but if you're farmpony and wingpony, sex is never bad! :rainbowkiss:)

1858305 Ah, yes, I added that last minute, and was running on 3 hours of sleep - it didn't even occur to me to read it over. I'll fix it in a bit.. And yes, the the universe was so inspired by your drawing that it made Rat sick which made him request this story...and then it made me sick by the time I was ready to post it. Damn this cold and flu season - caught a cold from half a world away -_-

1862243 Yep, the universe has its ways :trixieshiftright:

1858408 Oh, my! You're making me blush >_< Thank you for your kind words! I'm a nervous wreck after I post a story, so this comment really helped. ^_^

1858696 OMG, BronyNeumo, >_< Calm down, heh. Thank you, though, for your comment. And yes, Rat thinks so, too =P

1860186 I actually noticed that before I posted, but I only had about 30 minutes to edit before I promised to post it, so I left it in. I was all, "Maybe I can fix it before anyone notices or complains." -_- Damn you, internet. Meh, I'll fix it later.

1862142>>1862199
I KNEW from the second I received the prompt for the story that one of the first complaints was going to be about the whole "getting sick from the cold/passing it to someone else" thing. I grew up my whole life with people immediately jumping on my statement (even if I was just quoting someone) if something like that was stated. BUT first point to V, AND it can also be assumed that AJ and RD spend a lot of time together and AJ could very well have caught the cold from RD beforehand....

...and I like fetishy...what's wrong with feitshy? =( Not that I don't like "romantic", just prefer it in longer stories rather than as a one-shot.

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Didn't mean to imply that fetishy is bad. Just that this one not being so is nice since many erotica authors tend to let their stories be fetish fodder instead of stories and characters become their fetishes instead of their fetishes being a part of their characterization. Between your 2 stories you've proven to avoid both of those pitfalls.

1862428 Ah. I gotcha, I gotcha! And thank you! ^_^

That freakin' ROCKED! I love Appledash. Spectacularly written. Great job!

AppleDash? CLOP!? WRITTEN BY CALLISTO!?

2 words: YES PLEASE!! :pinkiehappy:

1875916 .....what?! >_< Don't make it seem like I'm an important writer or something.

1876270
Now now, don't sell yourself short! You're a great writer!

That something to fap to:trollestia:

lolololololol:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

"im sorry but i find it very ironic"
-Pewdiepie

that was hot :rainbowwild:

Another fantastic story. :rainbowwild:

>> Aww, thank you! It's just the fact that he wrote "Written by Callisto?!" in bold and italicized like it MEANS something that makes me pause >_<

1876270

You're not as famous as other people, that is true, but that doesn't mean you aren't a fantastic writer. So you can understand my excitement that you've gone and wrote another story. Which, I might add, was also quality work.

knighty
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Hrnnnnng god damn that was sexy as hell. Wish I had something more though provoking to add but...I don't!

1931959 Hehe, thank you, Knighty =)

just figured out how to look at your other clopfics... and i must say... your brain has amused me, yet again... good show ma'am, good show, indeed!

2082805 Thank you!....*cowers* Please don't Spam me again..

0_o how did that take me 46 minutes to read? ... well... it DOES take me about 3 months to read a manual... i guess im just a slow manual...

slow manual?... i meant reader... (i didn't edit it because i wanted you to see it... its halarious... i called myself a manual :P)

That was sick! :ajbemused:

...I'll go home now.

2123922 Can't....tell if you're kidding or if I should actually have my feelings hurt... :fluttercry:

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Nah, just a stupid joke. Sorry if it seemed 'cold', I'm still 'green' after all.

Okay, I'm done.

2126242 There you go. Quotation marks make the joke ^_^; Bad pun-ny, though they may be.

That got me a little hot under the bridle. I must saw, is this related to Stuck somehow? Although AppleDash is likely the most common shipping, it's never hinted at outside of a friendly rivalry. In this fic, they're a couple, if not yet going steady. Where did this relationship come from?

2533146 It was requested. Think of it as in medias res - it wouldn't have worked if it were their first time with the familiarity asked from the requester. Either that, or it would have had to have been a lot longer than I felt like writing at the time. It's a stand alone, but I would be lying if I didn't say Stuck was in the back of my mind when writing it, so I'm not opposed to people thinking that it's related to the story.

Really, this story is written with the assumption that you accept them as a couple, so you can take whatever beginning story you have in mind for them - Stuck included.:derpytongue2:

This is the first time I read about how they do it :pinkiegasp:. and I still can not imagine it:rainbowhuh:, I guess I need to read more yuri for finally get it :facehoof:.

It was romantic enough for me to enjoy it beside all the stuff in this :heart:.

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