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KamFiction


Hello, I am Kam. I have a wiki page or something HERE: http://mlpfanart.wikia.com/wiki/KamFiction there ya go

Comments ( 10 )

ill be the first to say... What the fuck.....

Wonderfull concept. But way to short.
I never trusted that fat bastard. :rainbowlaugh:

This was written on a whim this morning. Maybe I will work more on it, maybe not.

I had a recent Idea to expand on this into a story
My concept is actually quite simple:

Title: Artistic Luxury

Which would follow from Fleur-De-Lis' capture, sale to fancypants, this chapter, and the aftermath.

That is: she would be a servant to him, and would be seen as an Object of art: whereas her sexuality would not be indulged in, but would be flaunted.

1880697. Aww yeah, but can we learn more about her past? PLEASE?:fluttercry:

2391909
I might write on this again
but im in college now.

Perhaps in summertime.

2391950

Get your ass here summer so I may read MOAR!

Good fic, even if it is a shortie. Different outlook on FP and FDL.

2391980
Thanks
but honestly, I did not put in enough effort for this.
It was in fact, thrown together in 2 hours and not editied, on one day

still, i will fix it up someday. Gimme a month and a half lets say.

1858255 and I'll be the second one to say it. What the fuck. Don't get me wrong, this is a pretty original idea. By that, I mean it doesn't give me the feeling of Deja vu. But why is fleur a slave? A mare a pretty as herself (in terms of ponies) would know some self defense that would prove useful against rapists. Or muggers. But that's just my opinion. But we can all agree it feels a little rushed.

I loved this, very much.
By being short it leaves a lot of questions unanswered, thus creating a nice mystique.
And the questions that are answered create a tantalizing little world.

I hope you'll work on this, or something similar, again in the future.

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