Doubt

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Lyra, awaking from a half-remembered dream in the middle of the night, tosses and turns as her head fills with increasingly troubling thoughts.

All that is apparent is that it prominently featured the mare closest to her.

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Turai

Turai #1 · Dec 27th, 2012 · 2 · ·

Short and cute, just the way I like em.

...wait that sounds wrong.

Anyways, cute little story showcasing some of those stupid and unfounded fears one can get late at night, I like it.

The Princess Rarity

The Princess Rarity #2 · Dec 28th, 2012 · · ·

D'awwww...

Syvvak

Syvvak #3 · Dec 28th, 2012 · · ·

Great storie. Sadly, as I was readin this, I was expecting Bon Bon to be dead but was hoping otherwise. Seen to many. Glad you didn't do it. Loved the story. Not enough of these types of Lyra and Bon Bon stories.

englishwitch

englishwitch #4 · Jan 12th, 2013 · · ·

Dawwwwwwwwww
That was so nice

epreeses1

epreeses1 #5 · Jan 16th, 2013 · · ·

this was awesome
The way you described doubt and the feeling of helplessness great. i felt for Lyra and understood her pain
there were a few instances where i got confused, who gave the peck on the lips lyra or bon bon other then that it was great