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Silentpegasus


An aspiring writer that loves the fandom and it's works

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A lonely DJ and a depressed musician meet in an unfortunte way. Can Vinyl help this poor soul or will his life forever be singing the blues. Join Steady Beat and Vinyl on a musical journey that will bring two musicians closer than they thought possible.

Finally I though up a good story for Vinyl, hope this comes out well!
Vinyl X O.C.

Disclaimer:
I do not own any music featured in this fic. All credit goes to the people who made it.

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 108 )

Even though the idea of tragedy to love is a slightly outdated concept for stories, I feel if done correctly it could still be a amazing story. I will be happy to read on in future chapters to see how this plays out!

not bad like it so far

M04RP10X! Translation: I'm intrigued and would like to see more in the near future.

Oh my god...instantly hate Thunderlane and instantly interested in this story, I thought he would kill him like Jeff the killer but sadly no

It is interesting so far and you have a nice oc pony and I will be wanting to learn about him more.

Pretty good story! I think it'd help if you took it a TAD slower, maybe smoothed things out a bit- reads kinda choppy.

Certainly good enough for a +1 and a fav :pinkiehappy:

Looking forward to more, pretty good.

Not bad! Only things that stood out.
You spelled course as 'corse'


“Of corse I won’t say a word....
Except for my sister of corse.”

Look forward to more =)

Another great chapter. This story really seems to be coming along nicely. personally I would've prefered some drama like his ex comes back, telling him that she is sorry and makes him conflicted on who to choose. It's your story and I like it your way so keep it up. :derpytongue2:

1860610 Oh don't worry something like that will happen in the future :ajsmug:

Wooooooo beat deservers special vodka excellent chapter comrade

" like that rathe than in black"

forgot an 'R"

Seems to be moving a bit fast, with a bit of blocky text-moments....but pretty good.

Pretty good! ^_^

"G-got it.” Vinyl said in a scarred tone."

'Scared' Methinks =) Could use a tad smoothing out, but I like it!:pinkiehappy:

The story so far is pretty good. There are some pretty bad grammatical errors in there though. Apostrophes need to be placed correctly. Apostrophes show ownership in nouns, not a plural noun. Sorry if I sound like a grammar nazi but you just really need to watch out for those grammar errors that are dragging this excellent story down.

Oh, and why would you make Octavia lesbian...:fluttercry:
Whyyyyy!!!!!?!?:raritycry:

Another special rainbow vodka for beat congratulations comrade

Comment posted by GenericUsername deleted Dec 29th, 2012

Man, this great, despite everything ranging from spelling errors to that one moment when you spelt Gear instead of Beat, I couldn't stop laughing...and speaking of which...where's dat at and it almost seems like all your stories are the same...just saying, the main mare is alone with her friend and she confesses, yeah, that's happened about 3 times now...

1875237 Sorry when you're writing multiple stories at once I sometimes get the characters mixed up. :facehoof: For my writing style I've noticed this and will try and mix it up in the future.:twilightsmile:

1875507
It's alright, mate...I like your style

Now I remember where I heard that song, it was in the [PROTOTYPE2] live action trailer....hahaha

1883772 True, but I just put it in because Johnny Cash is Awesome!

Fantastic story!!!! i cant wait to see more of it :twilightsmile:

Likes this story.
Looks to see who the author is
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Authors name looks familiar
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OH SHIT!:pinkiegasp: its you again, the one who did Crazy for Apples, Well once again you have written a story that I can sink my teeth into. Gonna be keeping my eye on you.

1918608 I aim to please and feel free to check out my other stories.

Just found this and did I catch a Danny Phantom reference there?
Also good stuff dude/dudette

lol Danny phantom reference

screech hmm sounds like it would be similar to my ballistic roar.

1945414 Wasn't thinking it when writing it. Just circumstantial.:derpytongue2:
What's a ballistic roar?

Since I didn't say it in previous chapters I'll say it now. Sonic Adventure 2 was better than one. (There I said, what you gonna do?) I will say that Gamma was my favorite character to play out of all of them, and I loved his theme song even though there wasn't any singing like the others. Got a little teary when he died

1963121 Oh I agree, I loved Sonic Adventure 2.:twilightsmile: Gamma's and Shadow's story's really moved me and were the first games I played on the Game cube.:ajsmug:

"I found Celestia :trollestia: Great fic, great fic, makes me feel bad about my own :pinkiehappy:
On the corner on first and Amistad
Where the west :ajsmug:
Was but won
All alone, smoking her last cigarette
I said where you been?
She said ask anything":duck:

1967363 Thank you:twilightsmile: and you're fic is very entertaining!:rainbowdetermined2:

Just from reading this... good writing. Cliche' to say the least, but the writing is sound and the story has some potential. I'll be sure to comment where I see fit, or desired.

And "whee" said Beat as his life suddenly turns into a roller-coaster.

This is great. I am in love with this fic... It is sad I must wait for the update, so know I wait with baited breath.:twilightsmile:

Glad to see you didn't give up on this fic I really like it :yay:

Could it be:raritystarry: Has he Review Train finally made it to this station? It is, let celebrate with a review:

Velvet looked over at the white mare and wrapped her in a tight hug.

“Vinyl right?”

“Yes,...and I still have bruises from the last time you hugged me.” She breathed out.

“Sorry I tend to-.....Octavia is that you?” She said as her eyes fell upon the charcoal mare who had a bright blush on her face.

“H-Hello Velvet I-it’s been, ah!” Octavia could feel her spine being pulverized as the orange mare hugged her.

I wonder what would happen if Velvet and Pinkie hugged each other, would they snap their spines or will the universe blow up?

That first song really made me laugh.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

As for the second song, this is the second time I've seen this video and I still don't know what the song is about.

As Vinyl stepped through the doorway the brushed her tail under the blue stallions chin and started to take long strides making her flank sway. Steady retrieved a pair on sunglasses and bit his lip.

Dat plot.

I see your pic and raise you with a gif.*end of review*
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It is great to see this story back again after so long, if Velvet is gonna be in more chapters I would like to see a pic of her.

:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2: soo emotional. No review. I cant believe how you were able to cram so many songs in one chapter.
Was the girl in the Pumble and Pip dance number singing Japonese.:rainbowlaugh:?

Lip singing is an automatic disqualification.

:facehoof: it's lip-synching That is all.

Again. A fantastic.

Again, I needed to read the entire last chapter (or most of) to remember what the hell was going on.

Nice job, a few small errors here and there but no big issues overall. :twilightsmile:

Looking forward to more.:heart:

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