Jay, born and raised in war is teleported into equestria where he learns about true harmony. He asks for help restoring peace to his world and in return will help restore order in equestria. Old enemies will be faced and a race will rise from ashes to what it once was.
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So, is jay world in some sort of a apocalypse or in a middle of a war?
And a Fav was gained this day keep up the work
1855250 Yes, this will all be explained in the next chapter when Twilight and the princesses are asking all the questions.
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UPDATE, I went back trough c 1 and realized it had a couple of errors. If you were confused or at any point did not know which dimension you were in, you may go back and clear up some confusion.
This is a great story!
That being said... MOAR!
YOU DONT KNOW SHIT!!!!
Will is now my favorite character
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AMEN!
Man Shining Armor... I really hate him.
In the show he is stupid.
In this story he is a douche bag.
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I might have Shining armor be a little less douche-baggy
I might re write the story of the canterlot wedding.
No he must remain a D-bag. His personality reads it.
If I rewrite the wedding, Will is probably going to get even more pissed off and try training the royal guard
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No dont re-write him to be less douche baggy!
I like him being douche baggy it gives me someone in the story I can bring myself to despise 
>>trekee
Um ok, but yes very soon I do plan to re write the great canterlot fuck up wedding
I also plan for will to go full metal jacket drill sarge on the royal guard
Good, good... You are doing this to a satisfactorily degree to your... let's say superiors and we would like to say good job spreading this to the people of your world.
And let the games begin.... Boot camp
I have a good idea.
Why not have Luna's guards be trained to? Its cannon and fannon that she has her own Militia of guards. So why not have them be trained to! Even furthur in the idea, it would be funny if it turned out Luna trained her guards much more like they train American soldiers here then Celestias guards. Then we can see Celestia being emberrased.
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I was actually going to have the two humans complement the lunar militia. But since I had not mentioned them in previous chapters, I let it go until the next chapter. Maybe, we would call the ponyville lunar militia.
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That would be epic.
To make it 20% cooler it should be called the Equestrian Lunar Militia.
Oh I'm lovin this idea now!!
DROP AND GIVE ME TWENTY!!!!!
2001043 Thats exactly what I had in mind.
Writing the chapter now!
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Amazing chapter! The only nitpick I have is that they arnt being writen fast enough to quinche my thirst for beutiful literature such as this.
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But anyways sorry for the late chpter
Yes, I know this chapter was slow because of some school problems and it would take me the same amount of time to write one of these chapters to explain the whole thing.
Can't wait for next chaper!
Man i love it when things get complicated by a single sentence!
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Look at the capitol letterss in my first one
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2248211third... nice but technicly second but third comment
This story is like North Korea's rocket program.
It went up and then it went down. Sorry
2286015 What do you mean by that? It seems like a good story to me.
This seems like a filler chapter though.
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It was sweet, then it went sour
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Explain please
I will even admit myself this might be a little rushed because I didn't want you guys to wait a month for a new chapter to come out
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I don't know. In a sense it just lost it's mojo
2289411 Translated: He got bored with it.
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The next few chapters will be basically everything in reverse, the ponies in the human world. Which means moe jokes and more drunk people. This also means more artillery bombardments and gas attacks.
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Alright. It's not like I'm going to down-vote this story. It just lost me that's all, but still keep it up there.
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I know what you mean, I've read too many fics that 'lose their mojo'
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Your not bad kid. I like you.
Every time I see the AK-47's being the standard issue of weapon for a militant force in any story, I cringe. Today what most people call AK-47's are actually AKM's, as the actual AK-47's are quite rare nowadays. Nevertheless, good chapter.
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The war is between an American government and its people. Since Kalash weapons are a popular choice (at least by the people I know) by armed civillians I decided to use that as one of the common weapons the rebels carried. But thanks anyways for the info.
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The Kalashnikov is by far the most popular weapon on the earth today, not to mention the most readily available, gun and/or ammunition. It's just a pet peeve of mine, seeing when people make a simple mistake of identification, since most Kalashnikov variants look-alike. Anyways, I look forward with much anticipation to the next chapter!
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Yes, many more firefights ensue.