Hello. :D I've been lurking on this site for a while, up reading appledash fics at 2am (shhh, it's our secret), so I finally decided to make an account... to just... have an account. :D
Applejack catches Rainbow Dash entering Sugarcube Corner for the party celebrating the closing of Winter Wrap Up. Our favourite farmpony decides to rile up this excitable pegasus in humour of the holiday spirit with a certain festive plant.
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I don't understand why this has 5 dislikes.
I found it quite enjoyable.
Yes, I'll have a very good Christmas sir.
Applejack/Rainbow Dash is my second favorite romance (Following right behind Rarity/Twilight).
Well done.
Three dislikes? The hatred of Appledash is just irrational. Anyway, an amusing idea thaat could probably be extended out into a full blown fic with some work.
Hmmm.
Don't b hat in u guys, the person did say tht it was a quick story, so considering a third of the story is author's note, its a really nice short story if I do say so myself
The fic teases almost as bad as applejack, poor Dashie.
*upvote*
Oh joy feedback :D
1854362 Yeah, the discrimination is so awful, lol. Guess people can't even lighten up on Christmas, but oh well. >.< Glad you enjoyed it, and 'madam' if you will :P
1854392 Well the dislike and like votes are balanced now LOL
which is fair enough but xD and thank you! Unfortunately, I only have the patience to write one-shots. - -+ Stories with actual chapters, I think I have a disease for getting perma-writer blocks on them. D: Thank you for the faith though!
1854400 Could I ask for a bit more criticism than 'hmm'? :x
1854550 Yes, I have a tendency for rambling. xD My bad! And thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it :DD!
1854650 -whistles innocently-
Thank you for helping against the voting war going on up there :D lol
1855010 Well you really did drop the comedic awkwardness of the two kissing, granted you tried to branch out and bring Pinkie Pie in. Though if you waited until after the kiss -and some awkwardly comical statements from other ponies- then Pinkie's last line, it would be better.
1855063 Oh, I see. Glad I nailed the comedy, but I need to draw it out more. Fair enough, and thank you for the critic. :D I'll try to see what I can do in future stories... If I manage to write any, >>
1856426 I know what you mean. I could be a great writer, but ironically enough I'm terrible at writing, if that makes sense...
1858378 Well... can't say that I don't get you. xD I never really make much sense either, high five for being special!
Though with writing for me, I get this really nice plot idea, so I go to write it! ... Five minutes later, staring at a blank word doc having no idea what to write. - -; I think maybe I should just stick with writing school essays LOL
1858613 I'm actually the top of my English class, yet I have almost non legible hand writing coupled with my meager story writing skills.
Hehe, yes... Let the AppleDash flow through youuu!
THIS MADE ME SO MAD!! BUT, it was a really well written story,great ideas and whatnot but WHY DID YOU NOT JUST LET IT HAPPEN FOR DASH!
1858801 I do pretty good as well... well, I think I do xD, and scrawl ftw! :P We're totally twins lol
1859177 Truer words were never spoken <3333!
1859773 LOL I'm sorry D: I'm a complete appledasher myself, but I kinda imagined this set this at friend zone... so no make out session for Dash. :( And I also wanted to put a different card on the table, cause you kinda expect [cough, want] them to kiss and declare their undying passion for one another, but... plot twist xD
And thank you for the compliments, glad it came across as somewhat good!
1861019 Totally
i prefer pinkiedash but i like all rd ships,this story was ok i guess
1874044 Yeah, I've noticed that people enjoy shipping Dash with everyone. :P Nothing wrong with getting around a bit lol
And thanks, glad you found it tolerable. :3
The writing wasn't that good, but the plot was hilariously awesome and that's what matters. Good stuff.
I liked it, short sweet and, funny. Not to mention the best combination ever.
Applecheat
I laughed so hard on that xD