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Five friends are enjoying a sleepover at Sweet Apple Acres. What lengths will they go to in order to keep Pinkie away from the alcohol? Casual and silly, written during Season 1.

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i dont know if its a pun of not, but its spelled "wine"

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It's a pun. And a hilarious fic.

One of the funniest MLP shorts ever.

Rarity x AJ, the unstoppable force meets the immovable object. Awesome!

Rarity is wrong: alcohol does not quench thirst, it actually dehydrates your body. Same as sugar and caffeine.

I laughed. :rainbowlaugh: I enjoyed reading this humorous little story!

Two titans met on the field of battle, and both made me lol. I read this a while back, and wanted to let you know that I love it! 5/5 :pinkiehappy:

This was a very seriously well written chapter. I really enjoyed it and I'm glad to have read it:trollestia:

Well now I have compleated my quest and have now read every one of your currently posted story's and I have found that I want MOAR!!!

2057031 I've written a fourth one, called Cutie Mash! And I'm working on a series of funny oneshots like this one, but more directly inspired by the show. :pinkiehappy:

2424349 ok I will find it and read the hell out of it

I liked it. It was witty and cute and I could really feel the characters personalities which were each very distinct, and they were all very active, not just getting pushed around by the story but stirring things up themselves.

Really nice.

I wish it had more of a plot, though. It earns its 'Slice of Life' tag and then some. Nothing seems to 'happen' in particular. Although the main conflict was very cleverly conceived, it just seems to fizzle after it's done being wrung out for all its cuteness and giggles. Also I found it hard to relate to, or root for or against one side or another. At any time, I could have just put it down and never finished it and I would have been okay with that because there was nothing drawing me in, in terms of plot. The characters and the dialog kept me reading on but that's like eating popcorn or chips. You can stop any time and it's not going to fill you up.

Overall it was a nice read. It definitely had me entertained, and I guess that's all that matters.

I reviewed this story!

My review can be found here.

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