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TacticalRainboom
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Oh god dammit I forgot to find and replace for em dashes too
Merry Christmas to whoever this is for! The blog post is rather useful.
Shecolt trixie never read one before
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Fun fact: Trixie was originally envisioned as male. Male ponies are the ones with gradient eyes. I think also something about her eyelashes but I can't remember. Either way, eyelashes are another subtle gender marker for ponies.
so like that one chick from street fighter
Since when was Trixie a masculine unicorn?
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If you want to write the proper em-dashes — , just hold down [alt] and press 0 1 5 1 on the num pad. In case you didn't know ^^
I like the story, though it hurts a little seeing that Trixie got her will like that.
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I can never remember that combination. Why can't we have an em dash instead of | or ^ or _? Such useless characters!
If you like how I write clop then for Faust's sake go read the Gilda one or the Cloudchaser one instead. Works I can actually stand behind.
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Admit it, you clopped to it. Pervert.
Hehe... somepony got a very special Xmas present :)
The crowd goes wild.
Good job- seriously. A thing should be itself before you worry about what else it is. In its strangely consensual way this is pretty cool... talk about a My Little Equestria. Herds of adorable pony-boners! Cute squees of UNGH! This is DELIGHTFULLY wrong
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You are the last pony that I expected to not-hate this.
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I'm not really much of a hater, especially not of you
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<3 to you too~
For some odd reason this is the first video that came into my head after I read through this fic.
Trixie the damn dungeon master!
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DEEP DARK FANTASY
I should hate this. I really should. Degradation is all icky and shit.
But, but, but... I have read some really awful human-in-equestria stories. And I have to admit, there is something...
> At least you actually made it to Equestria, right?
This is dark and ironic and rapetacular and mean spirited, and it had me laughing my ass off the whole time. I'm not proud to like this, but I do.
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You give me too much credit; that line was just a lead-in to the (yes, humorous) paper-thin explanation for the character's situation. There's maybe a touch of irony in the fact that it's second person specifically because in my eyes that makes the horribleness better. And yes, a touch of parody in that it makes use of the expectations and meta-knowledge that you have when you read HiE.
This was meant to be "delightfully wrong," in the words of our shared poni idol. But in a marginally cloppable way, because the lady it was written for is an internet-jaded deviant like me who delights in all things twisted and wrong. For her birthday party she had some people make her a big cupcake cake with a picture of Rainbow Dash being eviscerated on it, drawn in frosting. I knew that the closer I got to crossing the line from erotic into horrifying, the more she'd like it. But I ended up keeping it simple to some extent rather than going balls-out. I have to admit that this was fun. And that I find it cloppable too. Uh, I mean, nothing.
This is rape, you're savvy enough to know what rape is, and you're a softie so you define it as what would be rape in real life. I thought you'd be offended by this and I was a little worried about it. Same way I worried Jinx would be offended by it (in a different definition of offended, perhaps) because he's so concerned with fics doing a proper job of things and not copping out like this thing does. There is next to no reason why the character wouldn't be sobbing and feeling violated at the end.
I'm considering writing DashxGarrus to cleanse my palate. Or a quick Cloudchaser thing that's canon to the thing I started for her.
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>I thought you'd be offended by this and I was a little worried about it.
I think I know what happened. There's a dark corner to my heart, which you managed to push me into, and there schadenfreude makes everything funny, or at least detached.
I read gorefic (used to more than I do now). I like "Cupcakes" and Project Horizons and Latias' Journey and Elfen Lied and When They Cry and that sort of shit. Hell, I'll praise the cutie-mark-branding scene in PH as "a clear, crushing parallel to sexual assault more effective than the actual forced-sex assault that occurs later in the text."
Where I get offended is when a story asks me to take such things seriously - and then looks all bright-eyed and innocent at me like I'm supposed to enjoy them. I think the half-assery you've employed here is exactly what makes it palatable. I bitch about Jinx's darkest moments, objectively not as dark as this, because he's so much more sincere with them.
At least, that's what I hope about myself.
Oh my gosh! A FEMALE human in Equestria? Thank Celestia! I'm tired of the bros getting all the fun!
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Yes, that's a large part of why I wrote this.
You're tempting me to write a female Human in Equestria clop that I'll actually be happy about, instead of intentionally sick and twisted while marginally cloppable.
Very nice. The domination is well played and so is the submissive role. It is a bit heavy in some parts though.
Besides there needs to be more female human X mare.
This was an enjoyable read, good work.
at first I was like
and then like
at first i was like
then i was like
at last i was like
The only complaint I have is this
It is not a surprise if you tell me about it in advance!
I spent the whole time waiting for FutaTrixie, and so basically skimmed the first 2/3rds of the story looking for penis.
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Well, I'm supposed to tag it.
... Bridles, bits and riding crops. Kinky!
Great fic, would cum again.
Wouldn't have thought that that silent person that somtimes comes to the IRC could write such things.
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I'm... Not very silent... But then again me saying anything tends to result in the mods threatening to kick me. What channel is this?
EDIT--oh right the Fimfiction channel. Yeah, I don't log in there very much any more. No particular reason. I suppose I'll start coming again~
Are you going to make a sequel or add a second chapter?
so, uh... finally got strong-armed into making an account here, but at least now I can say that this is like... my favorite fic I've read. the whole second person thing is a fascinating way to go about it and this is just about the only logical conclusion I would come to if the human in Equestria thing happened, which I normally think shouldn't happen, but it's at least fun to see it go so comically poorly for the human.
Huh... I liked the story but for some reason it bothers me a little, which is weird as I've read stories with more extreme content. I think it's because Trixie presumably thinks the human is an animal and the human hasn't spoken at all or something along those lines. Give me a story with someone getting raped and struggling and I'll be absolutely fine with it but something about this just... Rubs me wrong somewhere. I'm confused with myself, to say the least.
Oh well, it was a pleasant read nontheless.
This was well written, but it disturbed me because for the first time I was able to imagine myself in this situation. It honestly felt like I was reading about myself ending up in Equestria and getting captured by Trixie. It felt absolutely hopeless, and well... lets just say it took me to an odd place mentally.
Still though, I give credit where it's due. This was a good story itself, with no glaring grammar issues as far as I could tell, and the whole idea of Trixie being a transsexual was an interesting twist. The only problems I have with it come from personal issues.
Halfway through reading this, I wanted Trixie, any person who behave like this, and this fiction writer to die.
Im definitely a pegasister, and yes I have a thing for being in bondage XD