Two regular humans end up in Equestria, and immediately leave a bad impression. How will they cope with their new lives? Can they gain the trust of the Princesses and Mane-6? And will they be able to defeat the looming evil that awaits them?
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This is my first story, and it was a random idea that a friend and I came up with one day. Comments are appreciated!
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Interesting maybe a few more chapter like right now because magic
I like it. It didn't seem too rushed, but I don't know. Nice work, please continue.
I am wondering if i should bother reading this. I would like to ask if at some point they can walk around with their "cloak", but I know i won't ge an answer. I will probably just skip this like other transformation stories.
1935774 If you don't normally read these, and am even considering it, that's awesome. Thanks.
1935774 I worded the description weird, so cloak sounds stupid when I look back at it. But yes, in the next chapter or two, they will.
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So then they won't satay as ponies. Okay then.
No, they will not be ponies the whole story, but there is something deeper to all this. (You'll find out eventually)
...eventually? Its been five weeks since you've said that, its also been about five weeks since you've last updated this story. Has something happened to our dear old Captain Butch?
please don't take this the wrong way, I'm being serious when I'm asking you that. Most authors I know stopped writing because something happened to their personal life. I'm worried the same has happened to you. These problems could often affect more than just their writing, it can also affect the outcomes in their future. I know it may be hard, but try not to keep it to yourself. There are more than enough people with enough kindness in their hearts that you can talk to.
hopefully you will consider this, otherwise, forget all that this comment has just told you and forget the awkwardness that came with it
2145323 Your words are kind, but that's not whats happening. I just have somewhere more important than this story for my creativity right now. I will work on the story here and there, but my main priority is my song writing
I will probably keep the story as "on hiatus" simply because the updates will be very irregular. But one should possibly perhaps be posted end of next week
2145323 P.S.
I fucking love your picture
Thanks!
But now I'm curious... you're a song writer?
what kind of songs do you write?
2150743 Well a friend and I are trying to start a band in order to get college money. And you probably won't like the music we like
Try me
2154115 Alright if you insist. Reflections - ...And Found: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6LEyduArp3c
After The Burial - Ometh: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=USykCZCnC7A
Bullet For My Valentine: Waking The Demon: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gmuwfCzdqTg
In Flames - Dead End: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cmczLXID4Yg
As I Lay Dying: The Beginning: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eSzJmzojRjw
And thanks for the fav
2154223, AHAGGSAGHSGASHJAGSHJGASGAHUSGHASGJASJAGSJAGSJKSGJKAGSJHGAFAGHDVYTCVCUGAQDGUAD!!!!!
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You were right, I'm not into that kind of music
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But it didn't stop me from freaken loving it!
You shouldn't forget we bronies come from all types of backrounds 
Oh, and by the way, you write as good as you play music
...which one was you anyways? - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6LEyduArp3c
2175025 Haha told ya so. And these bands are just some of my favs and the ones I use for inspiration, none of those are actually me playing
2175203, lol woops
Me and my interpretation/reading skillz 
Still like the music though, and I can tell that you and your band are going to be as good as them.
Not everyone can be a writer and a musician you know
My fav. part is - 3:00 - when it gets all epic
The beginning isn't really the best though... gets way better at 2:00
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YaY
And looks like I posted the wrong song
This is my favorite by Reflections. And yes, they are the best ever
2175465 And btw, I'm not the only one working on this. zombieguy778 helps me come up with ideas ( most are actually his ) and we both develop them. So make sure to give him some credit as well
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Awaiting orders CaptainButch!
2224769 Your mission directive is to proof-read the new chapter later when I text you, as I will not be stopping until it is done.
Lol flippin awesome!
You finnally updated! I must tell you how awesome that is!
But first, sorry I couldnt reply sooner,
I fell asleep after swim practice...
Anyways, love how you added Bradley at the end!
That part made my day
However, you do realize that you'll have to explain at some point exactly how they got there in the first place.
I'm not worried though, you probably have this all planned out...right?
2263877 Yeah it's all planned out