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Clopfic
Applejack and Big Mac are the main characters
I don't think I like where this is going...
Read the summary, enjoy your 0.5 star
suck it!
So.... these are humanized versions? Only, cause of the fingers and the fact that AJ has boobs.
I don't really know what to say...
I'm still confused with their species, sometimes it describes them with human things, and sometimes as ponies
incest i.. uhm yeah... well I TILL GONA READ IT!!! >.<
135522 eeyup, well they're more anthro based.
135524 anthro/furry based ponies.
well im not sleeping tonight as far as writing good job and content
WHY!!!!!
Grow up you tards. So it's incest, it's fictional incest. No different from any form or situation of fictional sex. That doesn't mean the story needs to be bombed, judge it based on the story itself. I hate you kids sometimes.
RaingSemi would be proud.
Enjoy 5 stars from me, just because it's my treat.
135676 Thank you!
I wish others could see that :D
A well written Fic. Bravo!
that was a great clop fic the diclaimer made me laugh thank's for the read hope reading more
135498 to Ducreux'ed if the blue link doesn't work
oh and you grow up what happen's if i go to you stories and put .5 star's for your summery how would you feel
i won't stand here a let you dis my friend
135524
This. At least make up your mind about which species you want them to be.
If they're humanized, describe them as humans doing human things.
If they're ponies, use ponylingo. (you know, hooves, mane, tail, stuff like that)
It seems to me that this is mostly humanized, except for mentioning them as being ponies in a few places.
137536
HA, I don't have any stories furfag. enjoy you eternal damnation.
Darkus: PINKY TEACH ME HOW TO BRECK THE 4TH WALL!!!!
Pinky pie: ok
~~~~~min later~~~~
(Darkus punche's Ducreux'ed in the face out cold)
Darkus: NOPONY WILL MESS WITH MY FRIEND'S WITHOUT PUNISHMENT
good god... THAT WAS AWESOME! I'm usualy not in to incest but this was diferent.
265125 thank you very much for your opinion! That means a lot to me!
138721
I agree. Generally, I guess... I just didn't like the story. The fact that I didn't know what they were made it hard for me to picture the scene and to enjoy it. This really made it harder to read. Also, there's a lot of issues with the mechanics of the story. Avoiding the passive voice is pretty important. I'm being a stickler, but I don't know. I just didn't like it.
You have:
At the barn and stables, the apple family had ordered a new large swimming pool to be built. It seemed to be the right time during this season, and they had been saving a lot of bits to buy one.
Right now Big Mac and Applejack were standing, observing the shimmering cool water.
I would have written something like:
The Apple family had ordered a new large swimming pool for the back of their farm, sitting alongside the barn and stables. They had saved a lot of bits to buy one, and Applejack just thought that the right time had came during that season. That day, Big Mac and Applejack stood in front of the pool, observing the shimmering cool water.
good story everything moved nicely. All the trolls don't know a good story cuz this was a awsome story.
we seriously need more applecest (applejack X big mac)
For some reason I imagined Applebloom sitting outside the door, just listening.
seeing the resounding cry of "WHY!?" toward applecest, i then realized, there is something fucking wrong with me.... i loved this...
425529 Thanky!
426602
no, thank you
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Hooray, it's a crime against nature!
*Thumbs up*
I on one hoof enjoyed this fic, other then the fact that I could not tell if they were humans or ponies (which really bucked with my mind) I liked this, I'm an only child so my mind is not as fagile as it is to other people or ponies.....Hoping to see more, think you can do a Spike/Twilight romance clopfic? Pleassssseeeee
Ten stars out of five.....great job.
800423 thanks, and maybe. Mac and applejack were anthro in this, or furry if you prefer.
802148 Not a problem, awesome, I'm hoping so, we need so much more of that amazing pair, if you can it would mean a lot to us fnas of that pair. Ahhh...alright then I got ya, well the least that could have been done is if they would have had ponies tails, ya know. I like furries.
I was looking for incest. Thank you.
918414 you're welcome!
Loved it!
It kinda made me feel uncomfortable though. 
I'm not exactly sure why. I think it's the thought of a brother and sister having sex that make me feel weird. 
But it was still good though! I'll give it a thumbs up!
big mac whines too damn much, for a guy who never talks.
If it's a fic, you could make big mac someone else like change it a little bit and say he was adopted or whatever you want.
You don't have to fell uncomfortable about this.
Do you know where I could find CMC though?
I'm a foal (Child) and so I can like kid stories xD
Scootaloo Is the best at everything.
Ik I put a Scootaloo spoof.
Its just fiction sheesh -.-
hey there writer, you did an awesome job, well written fic, even if it's an anthro fic ( I am not much into Anthro ) I enjoyed to reading this one though.
1600673 thank you kindly sir!
1605028 like a sir huh?
me lika 
I loved this story. My only complaint is the anal to vaginal transition. That can cause some nasty infections
Still, it is fiction after all. And very passionate at that!
1739284 surprised I'm still getting comments and faves on this old piece of work. Thanks!
Fantastic work, friend. Like in the 3 others of your fics that I've read, the imagery is fucking top-notch. Something else is this fic is one of the three that have made me cry since It brought back feelings and emotions from a similar experiance I've had. (whatever that knowledge is worth to anyone) Anyway, I really like what work of yours I've read.
You've earned yourself a new fan, bud! 
1803124 Wow, that's really powerful! Thanks again!
Blahh, I lost interest about half way through and stopped reading it. It wasn't bad really just cliché.
It was also confusing, parts of it seemed to be based in a pony world but most seemed to be dealing with humans so that was rather annoying.
Lastly I didn't care for your disclaimer, I am not a moron and I know that you writing this doesn't mean you are having sex with any of your family members, not that it's any of my business who you have sex with.
lactating entrance... Meh, I can dig it.
138721>>297642>>135524
It's Anthro. They have a human physique, with pony traits, like fur, a pony's head, tails, Cutie Marks, etc.
138721>>297642
It's Anthro. They have a human physique, with pony traits, like fur, a pony's head, tails, Cutie Marks, etc.
I'm sorry but, the way you switched back and forth on describing these two leaves me to question, are these the Ponies or are these the humanized version of the ponies like from equestria girls? Also, allot of skipping around from one thing to another, I won't mention the grammar and spelling mistakes outside of this statement but the way it's written is just hard to follow unless you're skimming it. Biggest problem is if they are ponies why is there a pool, why do they have arms, why do they have toes and why are they wearing bathing suits when they are naked more than 90% of the time anyways? If they are the human counterparts why are they written as if they are ponies the other half of a time? Why do they have or need a pool when there's not only a river flowing through the farm but also several nearby lakes? Then there are multiple times where you are having one character do something and the very next paragraph they are doing something completely different that involves another character without any conversation, indication from either character, interaction, or segway leading into the change in pace. Don't take me criticizing this as me just trying to rip you a new one, I'm pointing out these flaws because I want you to either fix this or write better in the future and you won't be able to do so if someone doesn't point out what you did wrong and instead just pats you on the back and says "good job" or "great story" rather than "this is a mistake and that is a mistake".
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