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With tryouts for the Wonderbolts just a few days away, Twilight Sparkle decides to find the perfect coach to train Rainbow Dash. Unfortunately, the pony she finds is Rainbow Dash's male counterpart. Can they get Rainbow Blitz back home where he belongs, before anything too crazy happens? And what about poor Rainbow Dash, trapped in the Stallion World?

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Disasters? Surely ain't as bad as the one with the Exterminator we had down on Rout Guano...

oooo this got interesting

and it all looked hopeless....until he realised that the ratio of mares to stallions is...what? 10 to one?

This stinks, Rainbow Blitz thought. Ponyville was known for being Stallion Central, the place where all the most eligible bachelors in all of Equestria stayed. Now that the town was overrun with mares, Rainbow Blitz's bachelor lifestyle would be over.
"Wait..." Rainbow Blitz realized. "The town is filled with mares...the town is filled with MARES!"

:rainbowlaugh: took him a while to realise that

Well this was uneventful :derpytongue2:

make friends with the girl who's strangely obsessed with jelly

NO!! Shes a pervert. Hue Jelly (can't think of a three letter girls name beggining with H)

I face palmed at dashing dude but other wise this is pretty good.

:rainbowlaugh:
I can picture Dash freaking out cause all the Stallions in Ponyville will be trying to get a date with her :rainbowlaugh:

if Celestia knows Prince Solaris then she should know what universe he's native too, which would mean the tracking down the universe issue would be non-existent.

I agree with you Twilight
Two Pinkies is near apocalyptic :pinkiecrazy:

:rainbowlaugh: well Dash caught on pretty quit

Huh Dash is handling it better than Blitz
Dumb stallions :rainbowlaugh:

Well time to get back to watching power puff girls the movie ( I know what your thinking but I'm a dude)

I personally don't understand why this is so disliked,:rainbowhuh: it seems to be a rather quality story.
Well keep it up, I am enjoying this thoroughly.:twilightsmile:

i love this story please keep it coming:pinkiehappy:

Appledash, even if it's gender-swapped? Yes please! I dunno what all the hate is about - this is pretty entertaining. I've always liked the mane 6 mares meet the mane 6 stallions stories - they're always filled with shenanigans. Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

love this story P.S. HAPPY NEW YEAR and yes it is new year :twilightsmile:

That bit with Dash's brain was funny :rainbowlaugh:

Applejack is sure going to get it from Grampa the moment he hears he hit a girl.

Yup Rarity you self loving egomaniac :rainbowlaugh:

Wow Pinkie being responsible? :pinkiegasp:

Dusk Shine is such an idiot :facehoof: I swear only Dash and Pinkie are the smart ones in this entire story

:rainbowlaugh: Twilight you idiot

"Through the magic mirror!" Rarity said. "Hmmm, now that I think about it, that's like that fillies' book with the mad tea party..."

This fillies book?
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1909259 I believe that's the book Rarity's thinking of. She might have it confused with Alice Through the Looking-Glass, though, because the only part of those books she read was the tea party scene. Rarity likes tea parties.

as soon as I read the last part I said "oops," then i though for a sec the said" oh OOPS,":pinkiecrazy::twilightangry2::facehoof:

love the story, and I can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

First misread the title as "The Perfect Storm", which seems to be what the story is leading up to! :pinkiecrazy:

Two pinkie pies in the same house :pinkiegasp:, THE APOCALYPSE HAS BEGUN!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Now I see the disaster here. :pinkiehappy:

LW-313,
Forget about S3 E3? Too Many Pinkies? There were about 100 Pinkies in the same town.
That, was the Apinkolipse.

I don't know if it's been mentioned before, but this story bears more than a passing resemblance to On a Cross and Arrow (found here) and I don't mean just in the names (those are pretty much fanon by now).

I liked this story a lot however, it's very entertaining and how you managed the meeting of everyone involved was great.

To give merit where it's due though, I like your setup and plotline much better than that of On a Cross and Arrow. It's been better worked, overall, and it seems like more conflict is coming beyond the interpersonal friction caused by the peculiar situation everypony is in.

I decided to thumb up in the end because you've made it different enough in my book, to make it your own.

Keep it up!

That prank was PRICELESS!:rainbowlaugh:

However, I feel a weird sense of transdimensional shipping approaching. TwilightShine?:trixieshiftright:

I hate you Discord! I hate him, yet I like him because his chaos comes with chocolate rain.

Fun chapter. I'm sure the Cakes are thinking the end of the world is neigh! Only thing that kind of hit me wrong was Discord turning Celestia into stone. In the show, he said "I don't turn ponies into stone."

Can't Twilight and Dusk talk to each other using their magic?

1934408 Discord's not going to make it that easy now. :pinkiehappy:

1935444 Oh yeah right right right...This is the spirit of chaos after all.

So that's where Luna was the first time Dicpscord invaded
Doing her workout sessions to a crappy exercise DVD :rainbowlaugh:

So Richard Simmons is transdimensional? :rainbowhuh:

That explains a whole lot of mysteriously fit ponies.:trixieshiftleft:

Cutie Mark Crusaders are awesome! I guess Applejack will finally believe Rainbow Dash. I can't wait to see what happens next.:pinkiehappy:

The Apple Family from the Stallion Universe definitely has problems. If I was Dashie, I'd be done with 'em.

Applejack must feel like an ass f kicking Rainbow Dash in the face for no reason :rainbowlaugh:

1953856 He should! I'm shocked grandpa didn't rake him over the coals for hitting a mare, period.

Dat fourth wall... Y U NO RESPEKT IT?!:twilightangry2:

I don't think AJ told the whole story about Rainbow Dash to his family since Red Gala was shocked about the kissing part. Grandpa Smith may not know about him kicking her.

"Everypony says I'm Pinkie Pie, because I have a high-pitched voice," Sweetie Belle said. She grabbed a necklace and put it on. "So I'm the Element of High-Pitching!"
"Remind me to have you join our company's baseball team," Discord said. "Well, I must say, I'm absolutely terrified of the new Elements of Harmony, but you seem to be missing a dragon."

:rainbowlaugh: this entire chapter made me laugh my arse off :rainbowlaugh:

Oh my sweet Celestia/Solaris, that was AWESOME!:yay:

Twilight being the element of making long lists, I nearly fell over laughing. Definitely restoring my faith in being a brony, so I applaud you good sir.:twilightsmile:

Fluttershy's Element of Not Talking Very Much= LOLLLL:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

and Element Of Being an Apple Farmer Who Talks With An Accent!"= SUPER LOL!!!:derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

Hahahahh!!! Me... I wouldn't be a harmony element... I'd probably be an element of Chaos. Wrath, to be exact :3

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