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Not bad.
Needs the crossover tag though.
Ouch. That's a way to screw yourself over. Anything, what a start to a story! I know her mother's a sellout, but she's kinda of cornered. Freezing people and shattering them, even by accident, is awful drastic...
And freezing your entire town is worse still...
Hmmm, comes off as a bit over powered with "town-freezing capabilities" but otherwise a good start.
I'd had just gone with the entire home. That'd have the same level of despair for Sleet and come off as more feasible... or as feasible as one can be with magical, talking ponies.
4567354 that may be true but it also shows the potential power she holds and with the knowledge of what she can do, make her reluctant to ever use that power again.
I loved Sleet Gray from the Shadows in the Dark roleplay, so I decided to give the story a read. It's good so far, though a lot did happen in this chapter, and her freezing an entire town by accident does come off as a bit overpowered. Still good though; will continue to read.
Well, this is starting to get interesting!