• Member Since 20th Jul, 2012
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ThePopeMobile100


You may think me a heap of spare parts and scrap metal, but you couldn't be farther from the truth. You see, I am a mechanized pile of spare parts and scrap metal!!!

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Have I ever told you the definition of Insanity? It is doing the same fucking thing, over and over and over and over again. Heh, maybe I fucking crazy then, but there are all these asshats that think they are the kings. That they had their fingers on the pussy trigger. But down here, I rule.

So Vaas is in Equestria after he died. Will he make some new friends and throw down his old ways? Maybe this is his one and only second chance...nah, that would be boring and nothing would happen.

AN: rated T for a lot of swearing. Also, tags will be added as they become relevant.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 125 )

wow... this is just... wow

(wow=awesome)

Oh fuck. Equestria is doomed.

No other crossovers. Games don't mix well most of the time. Also, thanks for not making Vaas turn into a pussy, he's too insane for that :pinkiecrazy:

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I can't turn one of the best villains of modern times into a pussy.

OH GOD, FLUTTERSHY IS THE ONLY TAGGED CHARACTER (i mean actual characters of the show)

(will read later)

After reading Chapter 1:
OH MY GOD YES. SO MUCH DAMN YES.

Interesting, but you should read over your work. I found a few errors here and there, sadly I don't have time to write a full summary, but I will get back to you on that. Also if your in need of an editer, just PM me and I'll try my best to help.

OH YES.

For the love of god, DO NOT SUCK. I WILL DISPLEASED IF YOU DO.

There is so much win in this! I SHALL FOLLOW THIS STORY TO THE PITS OF HELL!

Holy crap this got semi-popular fast. Was I the first to do this crossover?

You brillant bastard.
This is a great story keep it up

This story deserves 3 MOUSTACHES :moustache::moustache::moustache:

Epic first chapter THIS IS GOING ON THE FRIDGE FOR SURE!!!

This is the best thing I've read in weeks!
Bravo good sir, bravo! :pinkiehappy:

all right! some good ol ass kicking!!!!!

Pretty sure this needs a dark tag.

Making 'Shy eat deer? :fluttershbad:

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This is nothing compared to what I have in store

The definition of insanity. Doing the same thing over and over expecting a different result.

1836399
...this intrigues me.
Proceed.

Comment posted by ThePopeMobile100 deleted Dec 21st, 2012

aaaaaaaaaawww yeah lets keep the badassery going!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1836399 I shall be looking forward to it:pinkiecrazy:

Did I ever tell you the definition of insanity?

1836880 OH FUCK ILL RAPE YOU WITH A FLAMETHROWER .

Comment posted by ameridude1 deleted Dec 22nd, 2012

1836880

Well shit he found my story.

4/5ths of this was the combination of a crappy HIE story where the character just swears all the time and every generic crossover attempt.

There were some pure gold paragraphs in the second chapter.

The thing that made Vaas such a great antagonist/Villain in farcry 3 was that he very rarely showed up. But when he did shit got real and you knew something crazy was going to happen.

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I appreciate the negative feedback and your right. The majority of this is just your standard HiE story. It's hard to make it not sound generic in all honesty. And Vaas was great because of how little there was of him. It made all of his appearances epic.

What I am trying to do however, is give a different perspective on how Vaas functions. Its hard to do with how little there is with him. Its hard because of how eccentric he is. But this is a new crossover that hasn't been done before. That's why this is popular.

I know that it may sound like I'm making excuses about why this sounds generic, but I'm trying to pack for a two week vacation while simultaneously writing a story. It may sound easy, but I don't have that much experience at either.

All in all, I appreciate and respect your given opinion and will try to take it into account. If half of my comments were people's honest opinions, then I would be extremely happy. However, as that probably won't happen, then I will take what feedback I get and try and improve on my writing.

"BAMBIE! I'M SORRY I SHOT YOUR MOTHER BAMBIE!"
Amazing story and idea in general. I love vaas as a character and I really want to see his portrayal in this story good. Now the only complaint I have is that you're making Vaas yell too much and get pissed off too easily. Sure while Vaas did yell, it was when he didn't yell that everyone lessened the hardest. Hell, his entire definition of insanity speech was done in an indoor voice. Hope to read more soon, keep goin and stay golden^^

1837836 I really love the story so far hope I can see more soon. Have a nice vacation!:twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by HedgeClippers2042 deleted Dec 24th, 2012

I really like your story, and I understand how you feel about packing and being an inexperienced writer. I can just tell you that it will get easier the more you write, but if you want; here's some advice: Don't strain yourself, write at YOUR own pace, not the pace others want you to write. Still, awsome story bro! :twilightsmile:

Hey, I was going to do a Vaas in Equestria story too. I guess I better throw my first chapter of 9.700 words in the dustbin.

I also like expensive things. Hurhurhur.

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No, don't do that. I can't write that well and another take on Vaas would be awesome and stuff

I'm gonna go replay the mission where I kill Vaas and gut the shit out of him over and over and over and over again. But, I do it with the same expectations each time BECAUSE I AM NOT INSANE :flutterrage:

Bout time, I was heading into insanity from waiting but I like this chap. Another please?:twilightsmile:

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Now that I have an idea of where this story is heading, then it won't take nearly as long

PLEASE MOAR!!!!

Fluttershy wasn't doing anything but being drug around on the ground for the past thirty minutes...

Dragged. Drug just sounds...no :facehoof:

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