You are charged with breaking the law in some manner--you’re now on trial.
Fleur de Lis is a smart, rich mare; one of Canterlot's elite. Her influence spreads far and wide, and she's able to do just about whatever she likes with no restraint. However, when she wakes up one morning to find a prize vase missing from her home, she's a little more than disgruntled.
Thanks so much to my friend KartalTheWriter for my cover art. Without their assistance, this story may not have actually have been posted.
Disclaimer: Rated 'T' for hinted sexual themes.
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CLAP CLAP CLAP. Good job for a first fic! You should be very proud!
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Thanks, kind sir! My first published work was actually a contribution to the Album collab, but this is the first one under my name.
Good job on this.
This is a good read. As soon as I read "paradox" and "court" I immediately thought Phoenix Wright. Thumbs up for you
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Thanks, Garbo!
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Oh, good! I suppose it's even better he was included, then. Thanks!
The pegasi mare opened her jaw to respond, but her vocal chords weren’t cooperate.
Wrong choice of words in this sentence Try:
The pegasus mare opened her jaw to respond, but her vocal chords wouldn't cooperate.
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Ah, glad you caught that. I think I meant '...vocal chords weren't cooperating.' Thank you
You did a really good job on your first fanfic.
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Thanks! I guess I don't really consider this my first fanfic, so I kinda went 'huh'? This is the first finished, published-by-me fanfic. I'd begun several others before this one.
Bloody hell that was all over the place. Masterfully done. It was very flowing and smooth and made sens throughout. Excellently done!
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Achievement Get: Your confusing story makes sense!
AWESOME! Someone can actually follow it! Thanks for the compliment!