I'm a comic artist and illustrator. And my fav MLP is Rarity, also love Sparity. my dA http://pia-sama.deviantart.com
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Spike is now a teenage dragon, and his love for certain white unicorn is stronger than ever, while she's not completely aware of her feelings, and has to fight to keep her little sister in line before a new disaster explodes. Although generosity may help keeping greed away, could also become a two-edged sword, and Twilight is worried about Ponyville being destroyed again as it happened three years ago.
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If Rarity was crushing any harder, she could make her own diamonds.
a bit of constructive cirtisism; use indents; the key to the left of the Q.
you know, this:
“You’re not laughing at me, are you?”
Sweetie Belle couldn’t help but laugh now. Rarity simply shook her head and closed her reyes with a frown. “At least you should try to hide it!” she cried.
“I’m sorry,” apologized Sweety Bell, holding in her chuckles.
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Ok, well i'll try, heh I'm still learning how to use this whole thing. Thank ya : D
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oh gosh, i'm so slowminded i didnt get it xP
Squee!
It's here! And it's looking good! Ooo... I've been wondering all this time whether Sweetie Belle suspects something or not... That would get crazy if she does. lol
I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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sheesh yeah at first i thought she shouldn't, but since now she's 3 years older, shes a teenager so... heh it may be possible, but she's still the innocent and cute SB so we'll see
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I'm just thinking about the shenanigans that may happen if
started to drop hints or play matchmaker between them. lol
He visto tantísimo Sparity que ha acabado por cansarme. Pero bueno, igual le doy una leída.
¿Trollbelle?
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al menos por mi parte solo leo sparity, heh
lo que es un misterio para mi es... para q leer una historia sobre un tema q no te interesa?
Brilliance already... i think with a plot like this a story can evolve quite marvelously. well done i will be following
1827468 Porque me encantan los Spikeships, porque a veces encuentro algo bueno en temas que normalmente me dan igual, y por cortesía al ser de los poquísimos hispanohablantes que conozco y poderte por tanto dar reviews más decentes que en inglés. Pero si quieres me voy
Nah, es coña, me iré si me da la gana
Si lo que te preocupa es que me ponga a trollear y joder por no ser mi tema favorito (he dicho que me cansa, no que lo odie), tranquilo, no soy de esos estúpidos.
Igual deberías ampliar tus gustos, hay cosas MUY buenas por ahí. Tanto de Spike como fuera de él. Si quieres te recomiendo algo
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hmmm ok, mientras no me trollees. Espero agregar algo de complejidad con el tema de Spike y su volada de irse a rampage, pero lo mio es más el romance y el humor, asi q espero que salga bien. Ahi me podrás destruir con más facilidad, pero considera que soy novata en esto de los fics y siempre me iré a lo meloso porque a mi me gusta el romance, xDD
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thankya <3
uh and i will make another cover pic later. I need one with a grown up Spike, and more related to the story xP
1827520 Es que hay que ser gilipollas para meterte en algo que no te gusta a molestar. Servidor también es novato (sólo tengo uno publicado aquí y está parado), así que te entiendo, aunque nunca soy muy duro comentando. Sincero, eso sí. Y lo del romance lo veo bien, mientras no sea en plan "amantes de Teruel". Vamos, agilipollar a los personajes
Ahora me entero de tu género, aunque tu nick era sospechoso. Y hablando de eso, me suena muchísimo haberlo visto antes. ¿No estarás en otros rincones de internet que conozca?
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pues no se a qué te refieres exactamente con eso de mantes de tururunoseque, pero no me gusta la chiclosidad asi q trataré de evitarlo, pero puede que caiga de todos modos heh xDDD
pues tambien tengo dA, y bueno si me has visto sería en el fandom de Naruto, más precisamente naruhina. My dA es pia-sama ^^ y si, soy mujer xD odio que este sitio no especifique de qué genero es cada quien.
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hahaha sorry, i'm spanish talker so it's normal for me to try to talk like someone so special like Rarity in a foreign language xP I like your suggestion, so I may use it ^^
1827586 Tranquila, si ocurre ahí estaré entonces para señalarte y gritar "SACRIFIQUÉMOSLA A NUESTRO DIOS"
Sabía que me sonabas de algo. Hace un tiempo estuve activo en una conocida comunidad narutera española, más que nada defendiendo el naruhina, y creo que nos tratamos por ahí. Qué le voy a hacer, considero que son una pareja destinada a ocurrir
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tb hablas español O_o
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te aconsejo que visites mi dA entonces, tengo un abultado contenido naruhinistico ahi xDD
Could use a extra enter between paragraphs.
It is quite good, though, and I found Rarity crushing rather cute and enjoyable. Sweetie was hilarious, coaxing information from her sister. This looks really promising, and I'm sure you won't disappoint.
This seems very promising. Please continue on.
Good story. Rarity crushing on Spike, too funny.
Great! Great!! GREAT!! Well sir you have my attention, and your writing seems enthusiastic so I can't wait for the next chapter.
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I'm a lady xD thanks for your comment though
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Doh!! Sorry I was so excited I forgot to to be nondescript in the gender. Although seriously this was a great start, should have seen it coming, MOAR!!
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no problem at all bud
1827761 I think you are on every single of spike stories, and i love all of your stories also xD
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Por cierto, excelente historia, Spike siempre fue mi favorito en temas de romance de fan fiction, el personaje tiene demasiado potencial
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sin mencionar que es el único hombre del que tenemos data, o sea la otra opción es yuri xDDD
pero a mi solo me gusta Sparity, simplemente amo la idea de que Rarity se enamore de el xD
1828858 Creo que ya lo esta, pero hay mas personajes, como big mac, caramel, braeburn, thunderlane y mas.
La verdad casi cualquier shipfic de Spike me gusta, el hecho que sea dragon le da mucho drama y originalidad a sus historias.
Ademas que no me gusta el yuri :c
I approve of this story.
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I can legitimately argue he's not XD
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mmm si pero en realidad, la unica pareja que al menos es onsided en MLP es sparity, y Spike tiene mas desarrollo de personaje, es decir, es el único hombre entre los personajes principales, asi q imagino q si no te gusta el yuri, es casi inevitable irse por los ships de spike xD así que te enciendo :D
I must say that this quite a nice beginning. I especially like how you made Spike a little more mature than the canon baby dragon, because there he's just a kid, maybe even no older than CMC.
Can't wait to see more of this story!
It's very strange, but there are sentences that get turned into paragraphs in the middle. Darling shouldn't be capitalized. There were a few places where it seemed words were missing or you actually typed it twice.
Also, damn Sweetie Bell, you already made the gossip mistake once and here you go again after promising to keep it a secret. That's cold.
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oh shit will have to check it again, such a long chapter is really hard to check. But i will do xP
Wait SB has not told her thoughts to anyone... at least not yer
1901866 But she's planing to. For like the whole chapter too, premeditated as it were
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I just can't help but imagine her acting like that.
Thanks for warning me out about the mistakes, just corrected what I found, and sheesh they were huge xDD and that stupid office word capitalize all the darlings itself and insists on doing so, it has to be because i have it configured into spanish, i dont really know. Also I write the whole thin in word and after i paste it here I lose all the formatting, it sucks, rly. But well...
Where's Pee Wee?
1901975 I totally see it.
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uh i'll take that as a joke...
I definitely liked these first two chapters of this fic. Only problems I'm seeing is the amount of spelling and grammatical errors. Kept reading alot of typos and weird word placements in both chapters. At the end of the day, this is a enjoyable fic but has some errors here and there. It doesn't detract from the overall enjoyment of the story though, but would really benefit from having these fixed. Thumbed up and tracking. Can't wait too see how this turns out
1902149 Pee Wee? The baby Phoenix that Spike is currently taking care?
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sorry i make my best for correcting it, but i'm not even english talker, I hope at least the whole sence can be understood xD
thanks a loit for commeting : )
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of course I know who he is ^^Uu
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ok will correct, thanks ^^
and thanks for your help, without it i guess this couldn't even be read at all LMAO
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i have chapter 4 but nope 3 lol just the idea, so i started writing it today. And iun spanish so i'll have to translate to english before xDD it will take a while i guess... thankya
Buen capítulo, pero me chirría un poco cuando en los spikeships ponen al dragón autoconvenciéndose de que X no puede quererle de ninguna manera o no tiene oportunidad por varias razones desarrollando una explicación y Twilight intentando convencerle de lo contrario. Debería ser al revés, él obstinado en poder hacerlo y Twilight intentando explicarle por qué cree que no como una madre o hermana paciente. Más aún en el caso de Rarity, ya que la librera ya le dijo que no tenía posibilidades en la serie (para que no se estrellase y sufriese).
Oh Sweetie Belle, qué planearás. Bendito trío de diablillas el que va a pasar a la acción
Y empiezo a ver por dónde va la trama. A ver dónde nos lleva, porque está en la naturaleza de los dragones el ser avariciosos y posesivos pero no creo que eso le siente bien a Rarity. Igual le habría venido bien una etiqueta de Sad.
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jajaja ok pero creo q primero lo traduciré, porq al final tiene q estar en ingles... salvo q tb quieras traducirlo? xDD
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jajaja no, muchas gracias pero q seria mucho abuso
te estare enviando el capi 3 apenas lotenga listo : )
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pero tengo otro fic... jeje
Augh! Forgive me for not reviewing, Pia, I've been MIA all month. Nice chapter!
Oh, Sweetie Belle! What are we going to do with you?
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dont worry i understand sometimes life just take you offline and stuff
hope seing an update of your story soon, though!