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Charles Rocketboy


Twist's special talent and passion is making yummy sweet things, and Pinkie Pie has taken her on as an apprentice. And everything is going to be fine. Everything is going to be fine. Twist is not a bundle of nerves and low self-esteem, nope no nein.


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Comment posted by TrevorLaneRay deleted Dec 18th, 2012

There was a roar of thunder and the heavens pissed all over the two bullies.
Win, thought Twist.

Really enjoyed this, we need more Twist fanfics! Poor girl gets no love at all...
And the chocolate oranges line? I see what you did there...:pinkiehappy:


Yes, there needs to be more Twist, especially after Apple Bloom essentially abandoned her after forming the CMC.

Pinkie poured a sack of flour over herself.
Twist meant to keep crying but it’s very hard to do that when someone pours a sack of flour over themselves.

I loved that part XD
The whole fic was great, a very fun little read. Good job!

Sorry, this story is simply not good, dear author.
There are lots and lots and lots of things wrong with it.

1822329 :ajbemused: Dude, Opposite Day was yesterday, and Unhelpful Rude Comment was the day before that. What are you doing?

This was hilarious. Pinkie Pie and Twist are a great pair to watch interact, and the lesson of the story is a helpful one that you tell through amusing anecdotes containing chocolate rain and the phrase "a pile of butts", which frankly wouldn't really fit into anecdotes that weren't amusing.

I think I might go looking for more Twist stories now. That could be interesting.

I'll probably also check if you have other stories, because I like your style. And you know what? I'm going to fave this. If you're reading this comment you may already have received a notification about that, but I'm going to be redundant about it because I don't really mind right now. I'm faving this because Twist is anxious and terrified of failure and I know exactly what that's like and I suspect you might also and G-AB Acid is not helping and I really do think this is good writing and I enjoyed the story and will probably read it again at some point. So! One gold star for you.

1823470 I don't see my comment being rude. Unhelpful? Maybe. I could clarify and point out everything wrong this story has. But then again, I'm far too lazy to do so. Feel free to thumb down my comment... not like I care 'bout the size of my e-dick anyway.

Yes, Pinkie Pie would indeed be a nice mentor for Twist. But for that to work, the story would need to be good.

Oh no! I'm doing it again!
Sorry if my opinions differ from yours about what a good read means.
I swear to you that from this moment forth I'll try my hardest to alienate myself and conform to whatever you and you alone decide is good or bad. I feel so ashamed that my opinions contradict your own... it's true; I'm a monster and I know it. Please, oh intelligent one, enlighten me, for I will not be able to live in harmony with society any longer if I start having GASP opinions of my own! Such a downright awful thing to have, don't you think? How could anyone-especially me-dare to think differently than what you dictate?!
Sincerest apologies, oh magnificent holder of insurmountable, true knowledge. Find it in your heart to redeem this poor, opinion-full mind, I beseech thee!

1820831 I know only a limited section of FIM's users will get that joke, and that makes me go :twistnerd:

1822329 It'd be helpful if you pointed one or two things out, then I can not do them/do them differently the next time round.

1826226 I apologize, dear author, for my laziness knows no boundaries. I won't be able to do so.
I will, however, point you to the right direction.
One | Two

Twist for the win!! :twistnerd: I am going to add this story to my group Twist Hope thats ok

1830317 Obviously, a group solely for Twist is an awesome idea :twistnerd:

Really cute story. Loved the concept, appreciated the execution, and heartfelt dawwwws were had all around.

But I did a double take when I read the line, "Maybe your cutie mark should be a big meth." I thought she was talking about cystal meth at first, and Twist blowing up Sugar Cube Corner like a meth lab. :pinkiecrazy:

1838129 Well, obviously i know what I'm writing NEXT then :pinkiecrazy:

I love this story. So hard.

Bwahahaha. perfect. Definitely more twist love is needed on this site. Especially if she's gonna be as perfect as this.

Go Twist! This is a lesson that anyone can incorporate into their lives. You can't get better at something if you don't keep trying.:pinkiehappy:


Now, I want to do a fic called Love Hard. Twist is in a building with terrorists and befriends them into defeat

@G-AB Acid
Don't be a downer-wowner about this fic. :facehoof: Nobody has to proof if they don't want to, and I thought it was a nice, short read. Next time, try to be more positive. I would write more, like a whole paragraph if I wasn't on an iPod touch. :ajbemused:

That was a lovely one! :pinkiehappy:

There was a roar of thunder and the heavens pissed all over the two bullies.

tasted like a pile of butts


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