• Member Since 18th Dec, 2012
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Rainboom_Flash


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Spike is just a baby dragon, but he's always been curious about the more "adult" aspects of life. With the help of a few friends, he will take the journey into adulthood and find out just what he's been missing all of these years. It's time for Spike to grow up and become a big boy.

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Comments ( 25 )

Hah! The mods must have liked this.

Max

Correct the grammar, and you will get less negatives.

Also that's a sexy way to die

I CAME!!!!
LIKE/FAVE
I lol'd at the Fluttershy part

And golden piece of literature, if I do say so myself. The grammar was flawless and the story exceeded my expectations. Great work. :yay::moustache::moustache:

Almost choked in my laughter. Have a moustache, Sir. :moustache:

:derpyderp1: Dafuq i just read...

2659084
Considering the subject, probably more than one thing sucked in this story.
How did I not see this story before now?

2808807 Becasue the writer did not tell you his story was better than yours, and because you didn't read the story he told was better and think "DAFUQ did I just read", and read his other stories to see if it would be as stupid as these. :pinkiehappy:

2810675
Hey. You said your story was the worst. I said mine was worse. *Shrugs*

2824306 18 followers. Have you even tried writing a proper story?

2826657
Yes I actually have. The amount of followers means nothing about actual story content. My legitimate clopfics have done rather well, but not everybody always follows after they read something they like. Assuming that I have no writing skill due to the fact that I have a small number of followers is quite ignorant and rather shameful as is judging my overall skill on the basis of one story. It's actually quite annoying and asinine.

This had to be the dumbest story I ever read..... Great job!

Shit had me dying!

SPike was like, “Yeah!” and then He waldked over to twilight with his big purple dragon lust boner. Him and Twilik Spakle went “ur ur ur” and then spike sprayed his baby dragon juice all over the place.

Ur? Who the fuck says ur? Hahahaha!

He smiled to Dash. Dash smiled to Dash. He climed on his flank and penetated har so deep thet she was close to orgassm
Spike unleash load of dragon juice and shot his load in his face while screamed “ASSSo steeamy! Rainboow Dish was like “Ahhh So GOOD!” And then she passed out from spike’s SHEER DRAGON AWESOME CUM!

Dash smiled to herself.... Spike climbed on his flank.... He came on his face.... What.The.Fuck?

Lastly I hate you for being mean to Fluttershy...

I'm really not sure what to make of this. I mean, its bad don't get me wrong. Really bad. But I felt like you were being completely honest with your audience.

For one thing, I felt that you wanted us to believe that you are a bad writer and that you only are interested in sex stories. I felt that you want us to believe that you have bad grammar and spelling. However, I do not think that is true. I think deep down you are a very intelligent and very educated person. So, my question is... why would you represent yourself so poorly?

Why would you purposely throw together something like this, that is so badly written, that you want us to think that you are not a good writer and you do not have good ideas. Is it because you lack confidence in yourself and you choose to write shit because you don't want your intellect and talent to be offended? Is it because you've been hurt in the past by other reviews into believing you write badly and that you just write bad because that's what you think you are? Is this just a troll-fic not meant to be taken seriously and I am just delving into it too much?

These are questions I ask. The story was bad, the descriptions were awful, the grammar was terrible and the spelling was all over the place. But I don't think that is who you are. I don't think that is who you really are. So, I ask why do you represent yourself this way? I hope I get a response back from you. I look forward to hearing what you have to say. If not, that's just fine. Best of luck to you. Take care. :pinkiehappy:

What the fuck did I just read!? :rainbowlaugh:

This...

Twitlight was surprised and said, “Wow do you wanna have sex then.”

SPike was like, “Yeah!”

and THIS!...

Spike saw rainbow dish flying through the sky above Rainbow Dash, “hey Rainbow Darsh!” Then Rainbow dash flow around and saw Spike on the ground Rainblow Dish was like “hey spike what r you oh my goodness what are you doing.” “I’m trying to dance and sing and get some of that ass.”

AND THIS!..

“Spike how are you fealing” Nurse Redheart asked.

Spike said, “I’m fine.”

“I’m sorry but you had too much sex and you are now going to die from low sperm count in 5.2 secenods.” “Aaaaah.” Spike screamed before he feel to the ground and died.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

What the hell did i just read!? I dont even remember reading it cuz i passed out from laughing so hard:rainbowlaugh: this is one of the funniest dumass stories ive ever read (if t wasnt funny i would have hated it cuz of da bad grammer and other shit) where the hell did u come up with this shit?:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::ajsmug::derpytongue2::heart::raritystarry::raritywink::scootangel::twilightblush::twilightsheepish: :twilightsmile::yay::trollestia::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: this is some funny shit XD

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