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FoxeyHound


I am a musician and writer, and an avid viewer and crazy fanatic of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic!

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Fancypants discovers that his fiancée—Fleur de Lis—was cheating on him for a long time, and that she was marrying him just for his money. This upsetting bit of news thrusts the stallion onto a path of rehabilitation. His struggle of putting the pieces back together isn't done alone, though as a certain fashionista from Ponyville lends a helping hoof.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 17 )

Not bad, a few grammar problems but nothing deal breaking, I look forward to your next update.

Ohhh, Can't wait for your next update! (Way to few emoticons, I am disappoint)

Aww s:yay:t! Fleur de Lis is now Flor de Mal.

Wonder what's gunna happen next? Will he rage? Will he walk out? ... Or will he join?:rainbowwild:

132123 He's definitely going to join. :rainbowwild: :rainbowwild: :rainbowwild:

Thanks everypony for your kind words! :twilightsheepish: :raritywink:

132486 You know what 'Flor de Mal' is?

It's good thing he didn't marry her otherwise he might have to give up half his shit. I like where this going. I feel like he's gonna get pissed, tell her to leave and or throw her out, and then he goes to Ponyville to clear his head.

Can't wait for next chapter! I always thought they'd make a good couple. : Though few mistakes here and there, I think it was well written. Keep up the good work! /)^3^(\

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5271/Charmingly-Rustic

Looks like you made it to the party a bit too late, eh? Well, doesn't matter; yours is totally better. :pinkiesmile:

Don't know that I'd necessarily say better, but please, keep going! I enjoyed the other story, and hey - sometimes the good titles are taken (believe me - you've got no clue how often I've had to change a title because somebody else STOLE it from me before I even had the idea to write the story. :fluttercry: )

Don't let it discourage you at all; maybe change the title, or maybe even just add a subtitle like, "Charmingly Rustic: Breeder Edition" or something else slightly silly like that.* :pinkiehappy:

Furthermore, I think this story has quite a bit of potential, and would love to see it continued. There's something a little... off... about Fleur when we do meet her, and I wouldn't be surprised at all that she's playin' around in other pony's pastures.

* - The writer of this comment is not responsible for anypony taking his horrible, horrible ideas.

AWW Sheet! (i can has firshed?)

Success! :pinkiehappy:

finally another chapter. Man, Liz is the village bicycle, everyone's had a ride. It's a good thing Fancy didn't actually marry her otherwise he'd have to give up half his stuff. I like that you didn't ruin his character and make him vindictive; Fancy with all his wealth and power could easily destroy the lives of Liz and Jet Set. I'm gonna love the part where he kicks her out.

Peace Out and as I've said before I want MOAR!!!!

I'm interested in seeing how this plays out.
Also,
you might want to up that rating to 'teen.'

There HAS to be more. There NEEDS to be more! :raritycry:

Make more. Please??:pinkiehappy:

Please continue this:raritystarry:

This story is quite promising. Please continue!

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