Dearest Twilight,
I have talked with sister about when I could possibly borrow you during your visit, and I shall see you at eight thirty, Saturday evening, at my tower. I promise to briefly discuss more on what being my student shall entail, and afterwards we may spend the night doing whatever you wish. Please bring your star charts with you, I am most interested in getting copies of them while you are here.
P.S. You may tell Rarity that I would also love a dress made by her for the Gala, especially if it means getting Tia off my back!
Love,
Luna
Twilight took another look at the letter before setting it in at the top of her second pack that would be accompanying her during her trip to Canterlot. She was due to meet up with Rarity at the boutique soon, then they would both head off to the train station.
“Spike!” Twilight called out, and the head of a dragon made itself known in the doorway shortly.
“Twi, what’s up? About to leave for your trip?” Spike asked, having paused whatever task he was in the middle of to answer her call.
“Yeah, I’ve got everything packed and ready to go. I’m going to head over to Rarity’s a bit early. Sweetie should be coming by soon to help out with the library’s duties while I’m gone." Twilight mentioned as she plucked her bags from the hardwood floor and levitated one on either side of her.
The warming midday summer rays of the sun beamed down upon her form as Twilight left the confines of the library and began her walk to the Carousel Boutique. Although she was running a bit early, she had a feeling that Rarity would be more than ready to go. The last few days she’s talked my ear off about how this was going to “make her career shine” and how this was “her life’s dream”. She felt happy for her, but it did get a little annoying, hearing it every few minutes.
"Twilight!" A voice called from above, as a burst of cyan soon filled the majority of her vision. "You headed off to Canterlot already?" Rainbow inquired of her friend, hovering just above the ground to her left side.
"Yes Dash, I'm heading over to Rarity's first, then we're going to the station. What's up?" She glanced at the prismatic pegasus and inwardly groaned. She must want something...
"Well, I was wondering, if you had the time, there is going to be a Daring Do signing at the bookstore on Main Street Sunday morning. If you could somehow spare the time and get me a signed edition of the newest novel, I'd so owe you!" She mixed her request with a sheepish grin as she brought a lone hoof up to scratch at her mane.
"I'd say you still owe me for all those times that you've flown through my windows, Dash. However..." She purposefully let the pause linger in the air unresolved. "I suppose if I manage to find myself in the area I could see about stopping by for you." The Carousel Boutique dominated her vision now as she shot one last look at the pegasus. "Well, I'll be back Monday, Dash. Try not to destroy the library while I'm gone, please?"
"Psh, you know me Twi! 'Sides, not like I have a reason to be crashing into it anymore, right? Take care in Canterlot, tell Luna I said hi." She shot off in a prismatic streak, leaving behind a gust of wind that nearly rocked the unicorn off her hooves. She straightened herself out with a quick thought and a flare of magic before walking up to the threshold of the Boutique. Raising a single forehoof she knocked loudly on the door.
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The two unicorns walked up to the entrance of the Ponyville Train Station, where a four hour ride would take them into the heart of Canterlot. Walking up to the ticket counter, they were greeted by an elderly slate grey earth pony.
"Ah, hello Miss Sparkle, it’s nice to see you again. And you as well Miss Rarity. You've been set up with your usual cabin ladies, I hope you have a pleasant ride today." He cordially greeted them as he handed them each their ticket for the train ride.
"Thank you as always, I hope your wife is doing better." Twilight grasped the tickets with a flare from her horn and settled them within her saddlebags.
"She's feeling much better Miss Sparkle, this summer weather works wonders after a chilly winter for her health. You take care now!"
They two unicorns walked on and soon found themselves on the platform, the train already in position awaiting its occupants. Handing their tickets to an attendant, they moved inside. The car that had been allocated to them was permanently reserved for the Elements of Harmony, and Twilight quickly tucked away her luggage before dropping down into her bunk. Rarity, meanwhile, simply set her saddlebags down at a table and pulled out her book and some quills and began scribbling before the train even left the station.
Twilight took a furtive glance at the other occupant of the room. She's probably busy working on yet more designs for the Princesses. Best to let her be, for my ears’ sake. Letting out a yawn, the previous late night caught up with her now that she was lying down. Letting heavy eyelids close under their own weight, she let her thoughts drift to dreams.
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Luna walked down a corridor alongside her sister, have adjourned court early today in preparation for Twilight's arrival later in the evening. Luna sighed, letting the stress sweat out of her as she vented to Celestia.
"Can you believe that one noble Tia? Having the gall to ask you for bits so that he could fund the construction of an invitation only strip club? Even though I've been back for some time, I still cannot believe what some of these fools ask of you!"
Celestia heartily laughed, reveling in the time she managed to spend with just Luna. Her sister had been in such a jovial mood that it was bleeding over. "Oh, while being out there, it wasn't the worst. I think the one that takes the cake during your absence was about three hundred years ago or so. A stallion came to court and requested that I fulfill his life's wish. After much inquiry, I finally got exactly what it was out of him..."
Luna awaited her sister's continuation as they made their entrance into the dining hall. "Sister, pray tell, what did this stallion want of your time?"
"He requested to worship my..." She trailed off once more, a blush becoming evident on her cheeks. "Thunderous Thighs. As he so 'delicately' put it. I hadn't used the Royal Canterlot Voice in around two hundred years, but I used it then. Blasted the poor stallion back near fifty feet, it didn't harm him, at least. However, that was the last time I ever saw him come by Court!" She snorted hard, taking her seat at the table. "That was the last time anyone really made mention of my love for sweets though, at least during that generation."
Luna joined her sister in laughter as they piled food onto plates with their magic. Relative silence descended over the table as they were occupied with their meal. As Luna finished eating, she felt a sensation in the back of her mind, a silent alarm that she had set being tripped.
"Sister, I must take my leave for now." Luna began as she climbed to her hooves. "I must meet our friend in her dreams and let her know exactly what my offer entails, better to get the first bit out of the way." She quickly hugged Celestia, who returned the gesture in kind.
"Very well, I will see you when we receive her and Rarity. 'Till then, Luna, take care." Celestia strode out of the hall to take care of her own plans.
Luna soon found herself within her room, heavy curtains drawn across the balcony to block out all incoming sunlight as she closed the doors and instructed the guards not to interrupt her. Closing her eyes, she reached out with both mind and magic, seeking out along the rail lines for one mind in particular that was dreaming at this exact moment.
Luna hummed gleefully to herself as she found her target and extended her magic to encompass the slumbering unicorn as the railcar she rested in sped towards Canterlot. She felt a slight pressure as she pushed her way into the dream.
She found herself in an open field, flowers abloom swaying in a warm midday summer breeze. Twilight was nestled underneath an old oak tree, a spread cloth underneath her. Sitting next to her was an image of herself, and surrounding them were numerous foods and dishes spread out in the style of a picnic.
"I do hope that I am not interrupting anything, dear Twilight." Luna said warmly, as the unicorn was pulling back from a kiss with her image, which began to fade as the lunar mare began to intrude upon her dream. "It would seem that even in dreams, I need not worry about any other mare stealing your affection besides me." She giggled lightly at her own joke, looking at Twilight's stunned look.
The unicorn soon recovered from her daze however, and stood up, the landscape slightly altering as the tree faded away, leaving them standing upon a hilltop together. "Luna? What are you doing here? I'd read that you could influence dreams at one point, but to actually enter them?" The unicorn sounded confused yet full of admiration at the same time as she gazed upon her with those soulful purple eyes.
She looks so cute when she gets confused... "Yes Twilight, I am in your dream right now, it would be best to address something now, while we have the time so it does not intrude upon our date tomorrow evening. How have you been?" She willed herself to be in front of her love as she spoke, and punctuated the end of her question with a chaste kiss upon the mare's cheek.
"I have been well, really just looking forward to this weekend. It has seemed like such a long time, even though I spent most of it occupied with my various experiments. That or listening to Rarity go on about finally making dresses for royalty. She keeps thinking that she'll wake up and it will just all be a dream." Twilight rolled her eyes at this last part, and leaned up to briefly return a kiss to her love’s cheek in turn.
"That is most good to hear, I too have been waiting for this weekend. Letters can only do so much, and sadly I cannot be entering dreams at any time just because I want to, otherwise I would've spent more time in your head." She giggled again, a large grin finding its way to her face. "So, even though we find ourselves together, I would still like to extend my invitation to teach you now that you are no longer Tia's student."
"Twilight. Have you read about Dream Magic?" Luna asked with a serious tone, trying to find her long lost 'teacher mode'.
Twilight thought for a moment, bringing one hoof up to rest underneath her chin. "Not much I'm afraid; I don't really recall ever reading anything on the subject." She paused, still in recollection. "Wait... Is that what you are doing right now? Dream Magic? I thought that it was something unique to you specifically! The implications alone..." Twilight started going on a tangent, but Luna broke her from it.
"Yes, indeed love, it is not unique to me. However, it is mostly a lost art, as the last pony that I know of who studied it was a stallion by the name of Summer Breeze, some one hundred and twelve years after my banishment. The last texts containing the specifics of the magic were lost in a fire, and Tia never took the time to learn it." Luna remorsefully lowered her head and pain was etched in her features, but she quickly smiled again as she refocused upon Twilight.
"However, and Celestia agrees with me, it is time that another should come to learn it. It was most obvious as to the who, it is simply a matter of if you accept or not. I must warn you though, it does rely on sources beyond just your internal magic. Additionally, the onus is carries is not to be taken lightly, as it is a most powerful realm of magic.
Luna stood up to her full height, and took a step back, putting some space between herself and Twilight as the dream environment shifted. They now stood in an exact replica of the throne room. Luna started speaking in a formal tone, all hint of emotions removed from her voice.
"With all that said, I, Princess Luna, Ruler of the Night Sky, hereby extend the offer to formally take you, Lady Twilight Sparkle, Element of Magic, under my hoof and wing as an apprentice of Dream Magic. Do you choose to accept this offer?"
Twilight hadn't felt so small in such a long time as she stood there face to face with Luna, no, Princess Luna, as the offer was put forth before her. Although somewhat intimidated, she could never let a chance at learning something new pass her by. Taking a moment to collect her nerves, she gave the alicorn her reply.
"I, Twilight Sparkle, Wielder of the Element of Magic, hereby accept your offer to train under you in the study of Dream Magic, Princess Luna." Twilight held her breath as the last words echoed in the dreamscape. Luna broke out into a large grin as she rushed forward and embraced the smaller mare within her forehooves in a gut crushing hug.
"I am most happy that you chose to learn this, love. There really was no other when it came to considering potential pupils. And I do apologize for the formality, I should've warned you in advance. I might need to make some changes to that in the future..." Luna rambled on, still holding the hug that Twilight had long since reciprocated.
Luna broke from her hug and glanced away at something unknown. "Well, you should be arriving in Canterlot any minute now Twilight. I shall see you soon!" She kissed the unicorn once more before fading out of the dream.
~{B}~{O}~{W}~{T}~{N}~
Twilight awoke from her reverie, the phantom feeling of Luna's kiss lingering upon her cheek as she giggled to herself. Rarity took notice of her new-found consciousness, and set down her implements. "Perfect timing, Twilight! We should be in the station in about ten minutes. I was just finishing up this design, then was going to wake you, but..."
Twilight removed herself from the confines of her bunk and walked over to the table. "Thanks Rarity, it’s the thought that counts. Were you drawing designs the whole ride?" She took a seat next to the fashionista and looked at her work.
"Well, of course! It is most important that I have something ready to go; this will make my career! I'll have the chance to truly influence the fashion world and leave my hoofmark behind!"
The two friends spent the remainder of the ride discussing the designs that had been drawn up. Before long, the vibrations of breaks being engaged were felt through the seats they were on, signaling their trip coming to an end. As the train came to rest in the station, Rarity double checked to ensure she had not left so much as a quill behind as they departed for the castle.
~{B}~{O}~{W}~{T}~{N}~
This better not turn out to be a TwiLunEstia, Space. I had that idea first.....
and yet another amazing chapter i need moar also first
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err, no spoilers or anything, but...
EENOPE.
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Thank you much, although Derpymuffins beat you. : )
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Slightly delayed, but thank you both.
Jab at Twidash fics? (of which there are far far too many. 216 in the Shipping group atm. The most of any ships. I never get why Appledash gets such a bad rap while Twidash gets feature after feature.)
Nice short chapter this one is, Yoda says. That being said, been meaning to tell you I really like the chapter titles. The formal offer should probably have been done in the real world to give the nobles and Celestia a reason for them hanging out so much but I don't think Celestia will be a problem on that regard. I'm kinda almost hoping that Luna will have a hard time teaching Twilight as she dates her because of the teacher student dynamic, but it shouldn't be too much of an issue.
Again, looking forward to the next
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You're doing a Twilunestia? cause if so awesome. There's only like six of those that I can find, three of which are by the same person and series.
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Thank you very much. As far as the chapter titles, to be honest I kind of suck with them, but I try to aim for what I consider to be witty. The 3rd chapter was originally going to be called 'Great Scott, There is no Part 3!', but Jekyll kinda said it was a bad idea, so it simply got left in the author's note. Trying to keep them relevant to the events at hand. Give it about ten more chapters and I'll really be stretching, I'm sure.
And, maybe a not so subtle jab at the most widespread pairing. I do enjoy it, but was too good to pass up.
And as far as the formal offer, well, it seemed right at the time I suppose. She already had clearance from Celestia to put it forth, and really she is only answerable to Celestia. I'm still juggling a few ideas of how the dynamics will work out, but Twilight can compartmentalize a bit too well still. We'll see though.
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I should note, when you do a Twilunestia, I'll be all over that.
Deja vu. Pretty sure I read a chapter from another TwiLuna story a couple of days ago that focused on Luna teaching Twilight dream magic. While it may not be totally original, I'm still enjoying this story very much. (Pfft, another MLP story about ponies? Soooo original.)
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Huh, do you recall which one by chance? You've got me curious. This is only going to play a small part in the story though, the main focus is still on the romance portion.
And sadly, it truly is hard to come up with something 100% genuine original at this point, I am hoping that some of the twists catch you all on your ass speechless in awe. Hoping being the key word. : )
I am most glad to know that you are enjoying it.
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Pretty sure it's In Dreams he's talking about (I think its the most recent Twiluna that has to do with dream stuff). Which is ALL about dream magic stuff (as it looks so far.) Don't worry though, cause I haven't seen many Twiluna that focus on the "after" portion, which is more the shame really. I know Aegis Shield said he was gonna do a Twiluna that started right after they confess to each other, but haven't heard much about that after that one blog post like, 4 months ago.
1928585 Just for you, I found it. It's called In Dreams. Only one (longish) chapter so far, but it does have Luna appraoching Twilight in a dream to ask if she wants to be her student, to learn about dream magic. In Dreams: Chapter One
I had to filter my favorites by character: Luna, Twilight, to find this. Even then it was the seventh story in the list. I like TwiLuna.
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Oh, yeah, the recently featured one. I had already had the concept in my head as it made things easier, but I recall that one. And yeah, the lack of good stuff 'post confession' was about 65% of the reason for writing this story. Some other factors also came into play.
And Aegis Shield. Did I mention I recently pissed him off real good in Wanderer D's blog? Guy wrote maybe one really good fic, then has since ruined the rest with poorly constructed Male OCs as part of a crappy wish fulfillment. And his attitude. Cannot stand him, and it makes me sad that so many folks think he can write amazing content. I'd rate his stuff as at best 'read while on the toilet'. /endrant
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Yeah, most stories with TwiLuna that I catch end up in my favorites or Read Later. Love the pairing, as it is my #1 and #2 Favorite ponies. Note that I haven't read that one yet. xD Nothing like coincidence, huh?
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I had this rant about him and how he tags his stuff written out (doesn't correctly tag the stories until their done), but then I figured this wasn't really the place. Only finished What Princesses Need, which left a bad taste in my mouth at the hard death of the Twiluna there, which prompted his blog post about that Twiluna I mentioned. As for attitude I couldn't really say as I've never spoken with him so I'll take your word on it.
And if you're looking for Twiluna stuff, you should check out my favorites. Most of the stuff tagged Romance in there is Twiluna at a decent level of quality.
Is it just me, or is this getting really weird.
I mean, Luna seeing Twilight kissing her when its not really her? OH GOD! THAT IS SUCH A WEIRD THOUGHT!!!
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At one point he apparently 'threw a temper tantrum' and deleted all of his stories. Yeah. And he has almost 2500 followers. Le sigh. It was that story that made me dislike him, and then the tantrum was the nails in the coffin. But yeah. Waste of breath really.
And I will take a look through your favorites. I will admit that I have gone through roughly ~70 pages on occasion with the filters of [Top Rated][Romance][No Tragedy] and Twilight and Luna. Maybe I'll find a good treasure that I've yet to read!
EDIT - Been eying 'Getting Even' lately. Not sure of the premise, and that is the only reason I haven't started it yet.
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Lol, remember that Luna was intruding on Twilight's dream. Once she actually 'interfered' with it though, the dream Luna faded out.
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Thats still a REALLYweird thought though.
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Is this where I go "I'll have to keep that in mind when I need a kinky dream sex scene?"
Hope you've enjoyed it so far though, all trolling and weirdness aside.
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No thanks. I'm good. I've been unfortunate enough to read to much clop for one life time. Life time meaning Celetia's age.
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I remember that temper-tantrum. yeah he deleted everything thinking his fanbase would follow him to Fur Affinity. They wouldn't. He then deleted the blog post about it, apologized and asked people not to talk about it, and apparently didn't have his stuff backed up on his computer or something, and was then banned for reposting his stories when someone gave them to him. I basically follow him for that one Twiluna he promised. One of these days... Gah, gotta stop talking about other authors.
Here's hoping that you do find something new! You can pretty much rest assured that if it has Luna and Twilight among the tags, they're the romance. I can't really stand Twilight crossed with anyone else.
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Whisper words of wisdom, let it be.
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Actually, now that I think about it, I don't think I've ever heard the words "Wielders" or "bearers" used in reference to the elements of Harmony. Celestia and Luna "Used" them, and Twilight and the girls ARE the elements of Harmony, atleast in terms of how the show refers to them. I think, anyway. I wouldn't be surprised in the least if I was wrong.
Jeez, Rarity needs to chill! But I guess she would be excited if that were to happen...
Can't wait for more!
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Just quoting the one post for both of your comments, I do hope that you have been enjoying the meager amount of story I have dished out thus far. For the first comment, I'll admit I love cliffhangers. This [latest] chapter did not have one simply because anything I typed up I wasn't really happy with the quality of, and it was mostly fluff. So had my first real hard ending to a chapter for once.
As far as the 'Title' of Twilight when Luna is formally offering to teach her, I played with it in my head and it seemed to add a little more push behind it. I've heard the term 'Wielder' and 'Bearer' before in other stories, although they usually are used to refer to them en mass as a group. They have been used for individuals however. My mind set is mostly like thus: The Elements are objects, even with Magic having been intangible until the other five came to be when first used them. Tangible items are more tools, implements, etc, thus making someone using it the bearer, wielder, user, etc of said implement. Mind you, I also like the idea if the Elements becoming infused with them, or them also representing the Elements, as the [non physical] aspect of the elements are represented by them. And I could most likely talk myself into a circle for this to go either way honestly. So, just going to fall back on the fact that it added more 'oomph' to the moment. No real 'wrong' or 'right' method in this regard.
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I'm using the passing of time to slightly mature and change subtle aspects of the characters, but there are certain core components of them that simply will not change. Rarity overemphasizing and dramatizing something as big as a life goal, well, I think it is most warranted. : ) And scheming out the weekend visit, haven't started writing on the next chapter yet (and probably won't until Saturday morning, using Thur and Fri to clean up a lot of things my editors have pointed out), but I hope to keep delivering some good stuff. /Random Note - I'm expecting this arc to hit about 100,000 words now, so it is definitely not for a lack of content. : )
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/waves
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Awkward? Check. Cliffhanger? Check
Awkward Cliffhanger achieved!
Hope you enjoy the rest, I'll see you if/when you comment on the later chaps. : )
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The follow-up to that little awkward moment.... so adorable! Especially when Twilight goes into full-blown panic over it.
So far, it's been an enjoyable, true-to-the-characters and mature (emotionally mature, not... you know, mature Well, technically, it's "mature" mature as well, but that's sort of beside the point here...) shipfic between my two favorite ponies, so what's not to like?
Hmm, the dreamwalking ability opens up some iteresting possibilities for dating discreetly, doesn't it? *insert lame pun about "mind screw" here*
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Indeed, it was a fun thing to scheme, let Twilight stew while Luna had to use magic to recollect memories. I've been trying to stick with keeping them mostly true to their base personalities, just with 5 years of maturity tossed on, which has allowed me some wiggle room. And Luna and Twilight are indeed the best two. Celestia has my 3rd spot though.
I do have one dream date planned out, and maybe a Mature dream interaction with Luna and Twi that will go into the sex stories, but at the same time I am going to try and avoid overusing it.
So in one flashback you had Twilight develop a full-body illusion that lasted an entire night. In another you showed her cracking the secrets of enchantment and powering a spell indefinitely off background magic. Luna has been established in show as a master shapeshifter. While neither of them has the personality to keep up an elaborate deception of secret identities for long there should be no problem just having a quick date at an ice cream parlor and such once in a while. This would work better in Canterlot because the official map has established it as the central hub for Equestria's railway network so a couple of unknown ponies will attract no attention whatsoever and any "breaks in character," caused by nervousness can be easily brushed of as "a couple of small-town ponies being overwhelmed by the big city."
Rarity would probably be the one to suggest it. I peg her as a fan of trashy romance novels and she's probably read some variation of "the wealthy noble disguised as a commoner to date his secret love," a dozen times.
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It's... It's.... BEAUTIFUL! I think Rarity gives some of the best crazy stills.
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Oh for sure, there is a lot of potential in various different ways, and Rarity does oh-so love those trashy romance novels! I've got a couple of scenarios to play out as far as dates go, and at least one will be via dreams as well. I do like your spin and idea as well, not to mention the attention to detail you showed by recalling those specific facts. : ) Don't know when, but expect to see something similar displayed at a later date. For now, gotta get past this Canterlot visit. *looks at GDoc* Yeah, just 3.3k words for the evening and night there alone, lol.
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Just one of the few typos that managed to make it past the front lines and to your eyes. Went ahead and fixed it, thanks for pointing it out.
Yep.
Double yep.
Don't know if this is one or not. (I really think my mind is starting to make up mistakes now)
Let's see here:
I really enjoy when people put little fillers into the story like this. Makes it feel a lot more lively than just a simple "They boarded the train." And things like this. Just some giving you some compliments on things I think are nice touches.
Regarding the dream sequence. It had a pretty nice placement in the chapter and helped to take care of some additional teacher-student things that needed to be dealt with. Also, I love dream sequences, so I hope to see more in the future!
Oh and "Thunderous Thighs"? Here, have a totally
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(Can you believe that one noble Tia? Having the gall to ask you for bits so that he could fund the construction of an invitation only strip club?)
Uhhh... How can ponys strip when they dont ware cloths?? I know that other "activities" happen in a strip club then actually stripping but you see the irony in this right???
"The train is a pain, and that is the truth."
Gotta give it to you, I'm glad I saw that. It's a perfect allusion in a relative chapter, and I love the series it came from big SK fan.
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Stopping here for the night. The biggest typo I see crop up is that you close dialog and the next line the same speaker is talking. If a pony / person is talking and a new paragraph is needed, or their actions and dialog are continuing in the following paragraph you done use end " marks. End " marks signal that speaker is finishd and someone else is talking.
Other than that, this is I have to say an interesting ship fic so far. I honestly started it so that I culd read the sequel, but this is interesting enough in its own right. Well I'll get started on this tomorrow.
I'm a little ashamed to admit that I misread that as anus
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"I do hope that I am not interrupting anything, dear Twilight." Luna said warmly, as the unicorn was pulling back from a kiss with her image, which began to fade as the lunar mare began to intrude upon her dream. "It would seem that even in dreams, I need not worry about any other mare stealing your affection besides me." She giggled lightly at her own joke, looking at Twilight's stunned look.
I know this is a finished story and i dought it will be edited but to me the word look doesnt flow/sound right and i think face would flow/sound better
Ps are you ever finish the sequel?
i honestly thought this said anus i had to read it a couple times 🤣
I don't see a lot of stories where Twilight is both the student for 'Celestia And Luna', or 'Celestia or Luna.'
This is, I believe, the 3rd time I actually seen this happen on this site, definitely an interesting concept.
However I don't think dream magic is the only thing Luna knows, I also believe she knows Black magic. Black magic, not Dark magic, don't get them confused with one another.