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Kira


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When Regular, a gifted detective, is killed alongside a syndicate and a revolution leader in a desperate attempt to rid the world of him, he finds himself in Equestria. He is a human among ponies. All is not well, however- Celestia needs his help to solve the case of a lifetime, a case that could possibly kill or save every last one of the ponies in Equestria. The situation is anything but regular.

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Comments ( 7 )

I enjoyed this. Despite a few mistakes. I look forward to more.

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Yes, I do try and minimize mistakes. They do happen, though. Thanks for the feedback!

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Using diploma font. I see what you've done here! :ajbemused:

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The name meant, in Spanish, 'The Pharaoh'.

"I'm not Spanish, I'm Egyptian!" -Ramírez, Highlander
I couldn't help but see that. Sorry.

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One more thing now that I realize it, how did this pass moderation? It has nothing to do with MLP... :unsuresweetie:

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This is a reply-all to your comments.

And I do love that font! It's actually called 'Cloister Black'. I didn't know that until a few days ago.

Yes, Pharaoh is Egyptian. It's just a street nickname.

it passed moderation for two reasons- One, I complimented the moderator on their eyes, and two, The moment adfter death is when he goes to Equestria. This will all be explained in a second prologue, from the pony side of things.

So far so good. You had the grammar nerd side of me screaming half of the time. The other side, the one that can appreciate a good story, was very much pleased. I do like where this is going.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::facehoof:

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