Jack was a former marine of 14 years. He is now happily married to Rainbow Dash.
He has the honor of being the of Luna and Celestia, as well as the lost Prince.
Along with an old friend, he saves Equestria.
But with everything good, there is something bad.
Go look at a half-decent story. You'd be wasting your time here.
(Joke) Alt. Title: You Make This Fic And Then You Die
[img]wait.jpg[/img][img]salute.jpg[/img][img]america fuck yeah.jpg[/img][img]wait.jpg[/img] And that is how this whole chapter went
Mmmm...
Nah.
it should be a new line when some one is talking
"waddup foal?"he said
"not much" he replied
but other than that I like it!
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Yeah.
I'm going to go back and do that.
good story.
What the HELL have you been smoking? Well, I guess storyline continuity just blew right out the window...
sooooo....Ponies? ever?
(is good though!)
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I'm going to start it back up January.
The last two were parts of Jack's life before.
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it IS january
great work BTW!!
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Nope. Still December here.
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where are you?
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Michigan.
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oops forgot what day it was,
i'm in Colorado. and it is not january
I am a COMPLETE dumbass.
The title.
"Keep your friends close, and your friends closer,"
It should be,
"Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer,"
My alcohol induced stories from 2 a.m. have a better like/dislike ratio(despite my efforts otherwise.)
I envy you.
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Wow, I can't beat a drunk guy.
Damn I'm bad.
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Could be worse, you could have been drunk when you wrote this.
Actually I'd like to see that.
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Sorry, I don't drink.
good story.
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Good for you. (Not sarcastic)
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meh
your writing is awkward
cliched and stilted
it doesn't appeal to me
downvote
sry dud
Gary Stuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!
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What?i96.photobucket.com/albums/l182/faithful_deception/DW_RunawayBride/aacsized.jpg
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I just got it.
It's official.
I'm a dumbass.