• Member Since 4th Dec, 2012
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The Last Renegade


Sorry to waste your time here.

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Jack was a former marine of 14 years. He is now happily married to Rainbow Dash.
He has the honor of being the of Luna and Celestia, as well as the lost Prince.
Along with an old friend, he saves Equestria.
But with everything good, there is something bad.
Go look at a half-decent story. You'd be wasting your time here.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 31 )

(Joke) Alt. Title: You Make This Fic And Then You Die

[img]wait.jpg[/img][img]salute.jpg[/img][img]america fuck yeah.jpg[/img][img]wait.jpg[/img] And that is how this whole chapter went

Comment posted by The Last Renegade deleted Dec 17th, 2012

it should be a new line when some one is talking

"waddup foal?"he said

"not much" he replied

but other than that I like it!:pinkiehappy:

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Yeah.
I'm going to go back and do that.

What the HELL have you been smoking?:rainbowhuh: Well, I guess storyline continuity just blew right out the window...:facehoof:

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I'm going to start it back up January.
The last two were parts of Jack's life before.

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oops forgot what day it was, :twilightoops:
i'm in Colorado. and it is not january:twilightblush:

I am a COMPLETE dumbass.
The title.
"Keep your friends close, and your friends closer,"
It should be,
"Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer,"
:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

My alcohol induced stories from 2 a.m. have a better like/dislike ratio(despite my efforts otherwise.)
I envy you.:fluttershyouch:

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Wow, I can't beat a drunk guy.
Damn I'm bad.

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Could be worse, you could have been drunk when you wrote this.
Actually I'd like to see that.

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Good for you. (Not sarcastic)

meh
your writing is awkward
cliched and stilted
it doesn't appeal to me
downvote
sry dud

Comment posted by The Last Renegade deleted Jan 6th, 2013
Comment posted by The Last Renegade deleted Jan 6th, 2013

Gary Stuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!

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I just got it.
It's official.
I'm a dumbass.

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