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One sleep deprived night produced this little gem and I'm honestly quite satisfied with it. Make sure to drop a comment! Inspired by the Shane Dawson song "Maybe This Christmas."

Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have always shared a personnel connection with one another but tragedy strikes before Fluttershy can admit her full feelings towards her best friend. All she wants is one last night for some sweet and simple closure. Yes this is Flutterdash but not EXTREME.

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Those feels... You did an amazing job on this ^.^

I found this while listing to Maybe this Christmas. It made me cry,then a non-brony asked me what I was doing I read it to her and she cried. :applecry: :fluttercry: Great story !

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...Why do technicolor ponies make me feel feels. Seriously. Why, internet, why?
That being said... Great story and all, but I reeeeaaally dislike endings like that. Why? Because they leave the reader with exactly 3 options;
1) The character (Dash) didn't actually die. Not likely, but can happen. Usually a Deus Ex Machina-move in stories.
2) The character is somehow magically revived. Why not, in a world where this can happen, but Equestria doesn't seem like one of those places.
3) Another character (Shy) is going delusional. Most likely option and also the reason why i don't like this move.

Comment posted by ToonKriticY2K deleted Feb 15th, 2013

1809561 Read the comment I put. It'll make sense.

Prefect simply prefect I live for dashie death fics like this. This was a wonderful peice for sadistic mind. I thank you sir or ma'am brohoof to you /):pinkiecrazy::fluttercry::rainbowkiss:

1808264 XD Converting non bronys with FEELS. Did it work?

Just read the story. Bravo to Fluttershy for not giving in to the depression. LOVE the ending. Deffenatly an up-vote

Oh my god...:fluttercry: poor Fluttershy.... If it was my friend I would of beaten the crap out of Star

....you know what the weird thing is, I actually started hearing Blue Christmas in my head when I was reading this:applecry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2:

Those feels ;_; Good work, you made me cry, and that was... a mysteriously good thing, I suppose.

But seriously, amazing job. Can't wait for more fanfics from you :fluttercry:

1844029 Oh don't worry, there's plenty of stuff out there for me to write. ^_^

Congrats, sir! The title definitely gives a good summary of this: 'tis both short, and well-written. Another beautiful work. :twilightsmile:

Ending...?
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Otherwise a great story.
~Wywint

Dammit, you writers making me cry. After this, I went and saw Shane's song. After that, well, you can guess. Reaction: MAYBE THIS YEAR I WONT BE SAD ON CHRISTMAASSSSS! MAYBE THIS YEAR ILL HAVE A HAPPY HOLIDAYYYAYAAYYS! This story.. Was beautiful. I haven't been seeing any like/fave worthy Fanfictions lately, and I just found something that's worthy.
P.S Yes, I did actually shed liquid pride. Ahhh nevermind let's just go with tears, that's the truth anyway.

4654279 I'm very glad you enjoyed the story! I'm thinking of redoing it and making it better. I didnt think I'd make someone cry over it though. O_O. That's a big first for me. And as a writer, thank you very much.

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