• Member Since 21st Nov, 2011
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Underdogg


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So everyone is hopping onto Fim Fiction now? Awesome, hope to read more from you.

You have my attention. Please, carry on.

ending made me lol real hard.

well this was a surprisingly good read. i never thought someone would make pinke pie a romantic. :pinkiesmile:

"I'm telling"

ROFL:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

????????????????? Get it I do not:rainbowhuh::rainbowderp:

Who's sweetie belle going to tell? Her parents? :rainbowlaugh:

Meh, could you please stop reposting it?

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Oh yeah, sorry 'bout that. I'm trying to make corrections from my phone and so I download it to the notepad and then reupload the corrected. It should be fine now though.

.....am I about to get raped?

181756 eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyuup.:eeyup:

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It's not rape if you enjoy it. :trollestia:

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Or if you yell 'Surprise'...or if you have your fingers crossed...or if you have a friend on the jury

About to be raped by Dash?

......Not sure if Gusta.

raped by rainbow dash my idea of heaven ME GUSTA:pinkiehappy:

Looks like I'm about to be raped by a MILF (Mare I'd Like to ****):rainbowkiss:.

Ahaha, you even added the Cupcakes reference, nice.

This could've ended so much better...

Dammit the second and third chapter certainly had an effect on my manhood no porn ever had.
Probably because I somehow imagined Rarity & Rainbow Dash in their "human forms" :trollestia:
Especially the second chap since a similar situation happened to me 3 years ago :moustache:

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That's the kind of response I was hoping to get! ^_^

not fully understandin' th' ending but the 3rd one with rd.... me gustaga!

very nice short u made there.. :raritywink:
the end with SB was a little expected but none the less made me laugh

not bad but i do agree its kinda fast and first

I saw several misspellings of "hear", as well as a mix-up of hooves and hands.

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ahh... I always mix up hooves and hands.

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What is the gender of the character:rainbowhuh:

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I dunno, like pone or somthing lel

You chose my favorite scent in the entire world. "Lavender and Vanilla", how did you know?:heart:

Comment posted by happy_pinkie_pants deleted Jun 11th, 2013

didnt like this one at all sorry. spike being a dick? :ajbemused:
but i will watch this.

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thanks for the watch. I'm still having trouble nailing the personalities of the characters - it's been a while since I watched the show.

DERP! :pinkiesmile: what if rainbow dash saw this event? First she would be like::rainbowderp: then::rainbowhuh: and then:rainbowlaugh:.

Sweetie, you should know not to mess with raritys private affairs! :duck:

This one, Applejack, has her particular eye on you ever since you applied for the job. Even in the interview she was shyer than her normal self. You chalk it up to respect more than anything. After all, she was never a pony that was interested in colts. "A simple mare with simple pleasures", she always used to proudly affirm. So That makes her bi then, right? :eeyup: :ajsmug:

UPDATE, THIS TO GOOD OF A STORY TO WASTE! :heart:

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glad you like these. Might do a Trixie one sometime, but I'll need to go back and watch her episodes agan :/

Good story, but just wish it didnt stop before getting to my fave. (Fluttershy)

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