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Soarin is having trouble flying after school Spitfire gives him a lesson.

This is a short little story I did on request because I couldn't sleep. Comments and stars always appreciated. This is probably the closest to shipping I've gotten in my life.

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Heartwarming.A couple minor spelling errors,but they're easily ignored.

>comments and stars
Now I have a sudden urge to refer to ratings as 'stars.'

Quite an adorable story of lifetime friends ^-^

And there were copious amounts of dawww...

Nice fic.

A nice short. They're speech sounded closer to adolescence than kids, not sure which you were going for. I kind of like the thought of them at adolescents because it makes the kiss seem a bit sweeter.

Aww, that was so cute :heart: Do you plan a sequel?

Daww. That was cute. I liked their banter, and the kiss on the cheek made me smile. :heart:

:twilightsmile:

very sweet ^^

Nice. :twilightsmile:
There should be more stories like this.

“That was terrible.” she tisked. “You didn’t fall right at all.”

Loved that line. Loved every bit of it. Keep scratching the pencil, or pressing the keys or whatever you good writers do these days. :pinkiesmile:

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