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Now THIS is dark.
I like it
Wait did I miss something?
"Ryan pointed the muzzle straight at the man’s head. “Out.” he said. The man, wide-eyed and fearful, hurried out of the car."
and later
"At the town, Ryan exited the cab and walked away. Harris was left to pay the cab guy."
So they stole the cab and then and then paid the driver? Also while on the subject how did they get cash? I feel like this has been rewritten but not entirely fixed.
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Thanks for catching that. I thought I had changed that back when I first wrote it, but the change must not have saved. That's a good example of why you should always double-check what you write before finishing!
3154577 Glad to be of help.
Woo hoo! Mash that fucker people! Be sure to start low and work your way up. Make the bastard hurt.
KILL! DOUBLE KILL! SUICIDE!
Easy to realize the ones being shot, but still a bit confusing.