It's been several months since King Sombra was defeated. Since then, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence have been presiding over the Crystal Kingdom, and quite happily so. However, a message arrives one day from Princess Celestia requesting Shining Armor to come back to Canterlot as soon as possible.
On arrival, he was informed of the problem immediately: there've been reports in the castle of a strange being roaming the hallways and bedrooms. Objects and guards have begun to disappear, and there have been sounds coming from the walls. Princess Celestia called upon Shining Armor because of one detail common across all eye-witness reports; even though the only thing anypony ever caught of it was a glimpse, they all reported it to be covered in a familiar form of black chitin...
My first fanfiction, all criticism welcome.
Dem Changelings...
I think the sea ponies are to blame.
(I'll read this soon, and give a better comment later).
Changelings are awesome
DELTORA QUEST!
(PS: There is 106 living in Thaegan's cave)
1844099 Spot on, was wondering how long it would be before someone got it!
..........which turned out to be not long at all. Which is still great :D
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I really like Deltora Quest.
1844105 thats a great work ^^.
i like it, really ^^, nice; a sweet and caring Chrysalis. A sweet, caring Queen like she should be. ^^ (and not a dump plain villain)...
what a troll lol
1844099 Actually only 14 live in the cave the frogs and fleas are only being held by them.
Changelings! *snugs one*
Yes, yesssssssss, murder all the ponies, avenge your defeat and make the Queen proud!
Bah, I bet Chryssie could break that inferior pony spell with enough effort.
Aww, it didn't kill the captives.
You gonna get rekt, Moonbutt.
Huh, interesting backstory.
Welp, you pissed him off.
You done goofed, Moonbutt.
Damn it, they're going to ruin everything!
Oh c'mon, the banishment spell is powered by love and cast by two individuals. You should be able to break it, especially if you charge up. Or just work around it and devour the love behind it.
Guh, I and ponies get away Scott free again.
Heh, nice bloopers.
A being able to assert himself effortlessly? HELL YES!