When Loki finally finish woth Odin's patience, Odin sent Loki to the only of the ten kingdoms where he could learn something about friendship. Two weeks later, Odin use Munnin for watch how is Loki with his new life, realizing it was a bad desition, Odin sends Thor for summon his mortal friends and search for Loki and bring him back for gave him his punish.
When the avengers land in Equestria, they discover their bodies turned into ponies, Now they have to figure the way to stop Loki from his attempts to take over Equestria using his new Changelings army.
But the things won't be easy for our heroes. When Banner gets lost in the landing, and Celestia turns into a cold tyrant been, they have to figure the way to stop Loki before it's too late.
PD: Cover image isn't mine, thank's Pranksolot for leave me use the image as cover. here is his DeviantART account: null
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Loki, wat r u doin?
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HAH...spiderman
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You are from a Spanish speaking area I take it... very well...
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That is it! No More!
I'm goin insane reading this!
Actually, I just delete that comment because I realize the page where it was commented wasn't the principal page, it was one of the chapters from beyond. Sorry if I turn you mad
I'm sorry to have to say this.
Reading this,(or moreover the act of trying to read this) gave me a headache.
I love the premise, it seems to be going in an interesting direction, just please edit so it doesnt hurt so much.
please.
YOU BUTCHERED ZECORAS SPEECH.
She speaks in rhymes, all the time! Surely a concept as easy as thus, would not be botched as such, I trust?
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sorry.....if I turn you mad?
I hate to insinuate, but english isnt your first language, is it hun?
Do you have any people you know that you could ask to proof read these for you ?
I want to love them so bad......but my headache just gets worse and worse.....
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Yeah, you're alright, english isn't my first lenguage, i'm actually from a spanish area speaking (venezuela actually) and I have some problems trying to translate my expresions to english (spanish is a very difficult lenguage to translate to spanish tu sabras). and sorry if my first fanfiction gave you a headchase (I really didn't understood what you mean) but if you like it or not I just don't care about it I just wrote it cause i was bored and it seems like a good idea, besides, my sister help me with the edition and she's the only spanish-english speaking I know and where I like not everybody known about avengers or my little pony (the bad things of live in a colombian town where they teach they kids to learn from a stupid series where they learn to be hitmen and hookers of the worste colombian mafia ). And one more thing: I'm not going to do any change to the fic,(maybe one or two epilogues) but I'm not going to change. You have to understand there's youngh teenagers that didn't grow up with a videogame or computer system with them, I'm just a noob, I like to commit mistakes because I can learn from them. Thanks, sorry if this comment give you another headchase
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And one more thing. Sorry for the bad grammar, I can't control very well my grammar when I just ate a carne mechada arepa
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YES, long live to the new chimichanga republic
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Its quite allright hun.
Didnt mean to insult you in any way, its simply the disjointed writing style that hurt to read. I love the premise, and where you're taking the story, wish you luck with anything you decide to do in the future.
That's still a comment
its very funny! i like it!!
sweet switching back and forth the poor ponies in the forest i pity them,
Wut? Can you put this in English please? Most of the words are spelled correctly but they don't make sence when strung together...
awesome! his is a great great story!
Might I suggest using Italics when characters are thinking? It's pretty much a universal technique in the world of literature and would make character thought sessions a lot less confusing.
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thanks. sorry for that kind of mistakes.
you'll see, in that time i was just a noob in this of the fanfiction and i kinda absolutely forgot about it because of a trip i had to do just two days after i upload it, so sorry i don't have much time for correct it, so thank you for your suggest and i'm really sorry for what my past me have done to my actual (very low) reputation. have a nice day (or night) and, again thank you so much for take the time for read my fic.
also, the english is not even my native lenguage and i didn't grow up with the english grammar rules on the internet.
thank you so much
You know, if you need someone to edit this, I'd be happy to help. I don't think it's fair that you're getting all this flack for something that's not under your control.
HILARIOUS
6109638 aaaaaahhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!! Oh god ;-; i... I can't... I just can't anymore I'm done I'm done * signs off *
That was short
there are a few tipe errors but other than that it is really good
Zecora speaks in rhymes why did you not do tjat
Yes Deadpool
so funny
That was great but how did i know that there was going to be a fluttershy and banner ship
Theres so many grammar mistakes but it doesn't really bother me I just wanted to point it out.
I thought Loki was the main character
Also zecora speaks in rhymes all the times, man
I can at least say I tried to read it....
You should have just said that English wasn't your first language, mate.
Sorry if I was acting like a jerk earlier in the story.
Could use an editer, but other than that it has a good plot.