Crux, a griffon recently banished from the Griffon Territories hopes to find somewhere to live, and that somewhere is Ponyville.
This is my first fic, enjoy.
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Well, the way I see it, if there's any good place to start posting stories, might as well be a MLP site, right? Love and tolerance and all that. Hell, it's why I started hanging around here. Nice people, even when I'm being my usual idiot self.
Bit of a short intro, but nice. You've captured Pinkie Pie pretty well, hope you can do the same for the rest of the main cast. Tracking.
Oh, and was that a reference to the Binky Pie series? Nice.
I really like the idea of this, and how you started it so far.
Can't wait for more!
3110
That's a good story, but I was actually referencing Mort takes a Holiday
Hey!You stole my title!
Other than that,promising story,I'll keep my eye on this one.
Now that was good, short but good, I am so ready for more.
cute little chapter! i like this story so far.
I like this story, its good, but I don't think it gets updated enough, I don''t want t rush you or anything, Im just saying it would be nice.
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Yeah, I'm a bad brony. I usually say 
"I'm gonna start writing!" and then Fallout Equestria updates, any other fic updates, new anime, going places, school, or I just get lazy. 
"I need to write more!"
Although I am usually like
So far I'm liking it. I'm liking how it's a nice quick read
. I just finished reading It's a Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door, and it was easily taking me like 2 hours to finish some of the chapters which made reading it a chore sometimes.......god I'm a slow reader
Keep it up good work so far don't think Ive come across another griffon fict like this good work on the Mort reference
You've set up a good plotline (and one that I was going to use, darn you!)
I've enjoyed the Crux - Pinkie interactions, too!
Keep up the work hows the next chapter going so far
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Not so well... Writersblock+school+everything pony= me not writing as much as I'd like, also I'm trying to make the upcoming chapters longer.
But, and this is a big butt, I'll try to get out the second part of chapter 2 out before Skyrim completely rapes my schedule in November.
15438 Well take all the time you need.........wait Skyrim..........November...........deargod.png......My life begins again in November
15438 but really take your time i know if a writer tries to rush a story it usually comes out in a lesser quality than the writer intended............sits at computer and waits for halo 4 and Skyrim
Yet another story shot down by inactivity.
i'm just glad to find a story involving griffons that arn't gilda
Huzzah For Discworld References, the Great A'Tuin would be pleased.
How...
...did you get so many character tags?
The max is five!
15438 dear god... How did you get this many tags!? I tried six, but it wouldn't let me, yet you get...
1...2...7...9...16!?!?!?
Jeez!
How did you get all of those tags? Did you hack the site or something?
Are you going to put this on cancel?
I like this premise, I'm assuming that what cause Crux to become outcast from griffon society will be mentioned. You have a good set up, I'm just hoping your follow through can keep building up the momentum until the climax of the story.
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five tags is max.
How the buck did you get that many?!?! 5!!! No More, Only Five Or Less!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!