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Luna and Twilight. Once they were good friends. Now they'll discover together a higher and more strong feeling. Love.They never had this experience before. How will they handle this kind of magic? How will others react to this? Will this magic spread among the little group of friends? But they all know that it will change the courses of their whole lives.
Special credits goes to my editor and friend brony 4ever for his amazing work.
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Wait... If Octavia is here, then... HOLY SH*T, SOMEPONY CALL FOR BACKUP!!!
Black Disciples never fight alone, so we need ZOCOM to send some Zone Raiders ASAP!
I bet Vinyl left her armor and weapons at home, again...
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Anyhow, great chapter. It really works as a prologue.
2637507 First off. Thanks
And secondly, It- It- it's not what you think. 
2647483That's exactly what it is.
Another great chapter! I'm not regretting faving this story.
"By the moon is so bright" Do you mean the actual moon or Luna's flank?
2677972 I try editing the errors so my beloved readers can read it more clearly with less trouble.
Uh, when you said she was 'dropping the base' did you mean 'bass'?
2680179 Yes, I think it was an innocent mistake.
2675229 I thank you for the great comment. And I promise that I'll try my best to never make you regret favoring this story. And the same goes for all my great and wonderful readers. I really really thank you for giving me that chance.
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Wow, 100+ favs. That's a lot. Thank you all for supporting me and I hope I never disappoint you. And because of this occasion, I will do something new. I'll make you decide what should be done on the next chapter. So anyone has any new ideas write it in a comment. And the one which gets the most likes will be used in the next chapter.
Wanna hear your thoughts and I'm sure I'll see a lot of amazing and creative ones. 
Spike's going to be pissed.
Spike is in for a big surprise XD
i think you mean Perfect
2709720 What about Tom then? Imagine how he will feel...
Alcohol and Luna seems to be as compitable with each other as Anchovies and Chocolate Sauce
2712299 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PgmXy-CqXP0
Indeed let the love quest begins!!!
Are the new chapters supposed to be being added to the middle of the story?
I think the next chapter should be where she wakes up in the castle because one of the royal guards found her and took her there. Celestia asks what happened, and Luna remembers and tells her the story. and she should swear off alcohol. Sorry I couldn't think of anything better.
2754065 No, but I'm just editing the old chapters that's all.
2760398 Ahhh ok, makes sense. Thanks for clearing that up! Cheers mate!
Oh my God, I love this story, it's warmed my heart at so many moments, which is very rare with me now, keep up the good work
2869303 Thank you my great friend.
I always try to put some of my own feelings into my writings, And I feel wonderful that these feelings were transmitted to your heart. 
"The place was so clean that you could off the floor."
I think you forgot to put "eat" in there
hell yes
A few hints to a few chapters ahead. and Twilight in leather? Lulu, you lucky mare.
Sweetie Belle. More than obvious.
Absolutely brilliant, well done!
Amazing chapter
Wow, a lil' bit fast don't ya think?
Apple bloom or sweetie elle I think, good story so far bro
awwww
DAMIT! STUPID SCHOOL
Ah yes, school. I'm about to enter my Sophmore year of high school and I'm sure my writings will slow down as well. They always do.
FK school
I hope you have good luck
Thank you for your support guys,
I promise I'll come back with better stories and won't let you down.
I'm wondering if who will pull the trigger first[codename for jump and hump] before or after saying 'you may now kiss the bride.'
Will this 'bigger project' include Twi and Luna still together? I really hope so.
3899613 Well, spoilers alert: It's going to be a whole new style, I tend to leave the romantic novel's writing for a while.
I really hope I can deliver it as well as I did here.
Stiff, at times lacking in emotion, and the grammar is...less than acceptable.
Overall, not a good start, in desperate need of a do-over. There is promise, though, just need to clean it up.
Also, stop abusing that poor period! Make use of the exclamation point a little bit more! You need your characters to show some emotion for us to be invested in them!
4252020 Hidoyoooo
(that's mean in Japanese in case not anime fan). No in seriousness, you're right in a couple of things. But that was due to the fact that I didn't know the true meaning of love till recently. As I've intended to rewrite the first couple of chapters I always get stuck in other things so I won't be able to do so in the meantime. As for the periods I make them unintentionally as this is how I normally speak, add to that that I'm not a native English speaker. Anyways thanks for the comment and may I suggest to give the rest of the story a try. 
P.S: I'm not Japanese as well if you wondered.
Hey are u going to write more or what going on ??
Awesome fic. There is nothing more to say. Of course there was little bit of grammar mistakes but even who doesn't care. I give it
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XBox? TV? That felt horribly out of place.
It somehow pushed me completely out of track. Also - didn't they plan their second date? Having sex already, even before telling Celestia, they... really move their relationship fast, don't they? It's getting a little cheesy here and there, but what made me laugh was the moment I realized that Twilight and Luna had agreed to keep their relationship a secret.
Yeah. That was a smart and stealthy move. Nopony would ever guess who's written that. So that night, every single pony all over Equestria looking up at the night sky could've easily figured out their bonding. Yeah, those two aren't smartypants at all...
...
And Luna rearranged the stars, writing "I love you, Twilight" all over the night sky.
Wow... who said that? Way to ruin the moment.
Also: Twilight, checklist- and planning-obsessed Twilight, starting to plan a party for the exact same evening, without even asking Luna or Celestia, if they even got the time to attend...? That's way out of character and rather... inconsiderate. What if Luna would've been to exhausted from her day? Would she attend her already planned and set anniversary-party alone...? That would've been awkward.