Poems of Ponyville - Christmas Carols

by dashie76

Fluttershy The Can't Fly Pegasus - Rudoph the Red Nosed Reindeer

Fluttershy the Can't Fly Pegasus - Rudoph the Red Nosed Reindeer
by dashie76
I do not own "Rudpoh the Red Nosed Reindeer." This is a fan made carol.

You know Daring and Fleetfoot and Soarin' and Derpy...
Spitfire and Snowflake and Thunderlane and Dashie...
But do you recall,
The most adorable pegasus of all?

Fluttershy the Can't Fly Pegasus
Was known to never fly at all
And every time she took off
Almost right away, she'd fall.

All of the other pegasi
Used to tease and push her around
But then she fell out of the sky
And crashed right down onto the ground.

But that night when Nightmare came,
Twilight came to ask:
"Fluttershy, you're so kind! I say,
Won't you help us save the day?

Then all the pegasi loved her,
Threw a party with a marching band.
"Fluttershy the Can't Fly Pegasus,
You'll be known across the land!"

Comments

[dashie76]

This one was...alright, I guess. It's rather short, and the title is a bit silly, but I suppose that's alright. Remember to comment to tell me what you think and give constructive criticism if necessary!

[FlitterCCmod]

The syllables don't work with the tune, as "reindeer" has two and "pegasus" has three.

[dashie76]

1766056I figured that, if you swing the notes during the lines including "pegasus," it works. It works that way, right?

[alicorn_the_epic]

Yes moar, have a flightless pony

[Smoker]

The end should have Ben,

"Fluttershy the no-fly Pegasus...
You'll go down in histor-SQUEE!"