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Sage Probo


Just your average, normal guy from next corner.

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Stella Dawn is having recurring nightmares. She didn't tell anyone about them. After weeks of relentless
attacks, she finally told her mother, and after some discussion and research,
decided to ask the princess for some clues. What she told her mother might be connected
to her strange cutie mark, and so they embark on a journey to find out the truth.

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Tags and Characters will be added as the story goes on.

Drop a comment or two, and critic is appreciated to improve myself.

Edited by Static Shock, he's awesome. (Only the first half of Chapter 1)
Edited by barbeque, pointed out some other flaws I didn't catch.
Coverart drawn by Accelerando

Rest needs to be edited yet.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 10 )
Comment posted by Sage Probo deleted Dec 12th, 2012

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I know, it's beautiful, isn't it? :rainbowlaugh:

thats the most beautiful and inspiring cover art ive ever laid eyes on

Besides the marvelous cover pic (you need to tell me the artists name, it's just so good), this story seems very good. I'll wait until there is a little more before I give a critique and a like. But so far, it seems to be in the right direction.

I need to change that pic soon :facehoof:

And theeeeen? *waits on the edge of his seat* :twilightoops:

1857356 And then? You have to wait for the next chapter, like the others do :rainbowlaugh:

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