CrescentShimmer
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Finally complete! Took 9 weeks (planning and all) and I'm really proud of the final product. There may be a few edits done later in the month, I just needed to get it online before Winter Break. Stay awesome, ponies!
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(Still tagged as Incomplete here.)
It makes since that she did, but I still find it kinda funny that she suddenly remembered she had a super-power
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Ugh, how can I fix that? I'm new to using this site.
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Welcome to FIMFic!
Hover over your name on the menu, then go to Stories in the dropdown, click the Edit icon next to your story title (looks like a pencil), and the line under your story description lets you change the story's status. Select 'Completed', then go to the bottom and hit the Edit Story button, and you should be good.
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Done! Thanks for the help
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Yeah, I know
I may edit that a little later.
Beautiful, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Will you be writing any more stories?
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Thank you very much for the kind words. This was initially intended to be a single project, however due to the popularity of the piece, sequels are being planned
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Happy to!
A nice story. The chapters could be longer though
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The shortness is just my style. I prefer short stories with very short chapters. Seems more enjoyable to read in my opinion.
Worth the read.
Well word the read.
Good. I like the concept. It was clean, as far as techicnical errors. If there are any, I didnt notice them and I usually do. Some issues detracted from its potential, I feel.
Anytime dialog occured, espically with the mane 6, it didnt flow.well. I found myself skipping large* portions of dialog.
The magic capability she has seems resonable, but the way it was introduced felt random and overexplained. Then it was only used that once.
The whole thing with the robber felt like a random tangent.
*Large considering the size of the story.
Im leaving this unrated,with no thumbs.
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Thanks for your input.
I plan to address the randomness of the spell in an update soon. Also, the entire part about Summer Blaze is a cameo/reference sort of thing to a friend of mine.
That's a nice introspective fic
Alt. Title: A Shimmer Of Dope
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Thanks? I think?
Crescent's plan of hiding her blindness seems to not be going very well so far,
Oh well, it works regardless.
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That's the intended direction. Do you plan to finish?
Piknie :hi where is she ....... ohh cupcake
I bont like the dad he mean
He going to be like so this is how it is to be blined