Rarity writes a diary entry, puzzling out her thoughts and feelings after being kidnapped by a rampaging dragon.
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paleowriter
Pinkie Pie is best pony. (Though all my fics are about Spike and Rarity.)
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This was darling. Though really, the least she could do would be to give him a chance. It'd help them both even if it didn't work out. >.>
125710 Why thank you! =) And yeah...Rarity's...a complicated pony. Maybe she'll give him a chance later.
Or maybe not. Who knows with that pony.
a very nice take on why rarity did the things she did.
keep it up
125739 Thanks very much!
Keep up the good work!
Badass writing, she annoys me as much as normal Rarity xD
Ah yes, this one. I already read it on fanfiction.net, but it's always welcome to see a story like this in more places. Nicely done, and Rarity's voice in this is spot-on. Me like.
125758 Thanks!
125835 Mission accomplished then.
125890 Thanks so much! Writing Rarity is a fun challenge, so I'm glad to hear her voice was true to her character.
I could see rarity keeping a Diary and referring to it as "Dear Diary". The personalization is similar to her 'affair' with Tom the Boulder. It just.. fits with her personality. I applaud you in how you did this.
127285 Thanks! Rarity does love to personify things. (Ponify things?)
Brilliantly written, serves as a good prologue to your 9-steps fic, provides excellent insight into Rarity's POV in Secret of My Excess, and most importantly of all, it sounds like something the character would actually say/write. Even in some of the better fanfics, this critical detail is either done poorly or forgotten almost entirely.
So props all around, and please do keep writing 9-steps, I REALLY like its... mane?
Rarity? Not liking drama?
She seems like such a drama queen though...
Very well written though and very, very intriguing!
Soooo... does this diary entry go along with "Nine Easy Steps"?
Such a sweet insight into our beloved drama queen.
Maybe she one day realizes that her prince wears a shining armour of finest scales
And don't worry about the age difference, Rarity, technically, he has already been an adult.
damn just tell spike you love him already.
D'awww...
Beautiful!
I read this all in Rarity's voice. The melodrama fits her perfectly. Great job!
Wow, all this while, I was reading it in Rarity's voice, and the story is so in-character. Keep up the good work!
Beautifully touching. I can tell Rarity does love Spike, but just not in the way Spike loves Rarity. Rarity loves Spike as in a best friend and true friend.
this is well written and feels like what Rarity's would think about the situation. you get a like from me.
I'm gonna have to follow you now, aren't I?
This seems perfectly in character. And Rarity being hypocritical about drama is hilarious. Well done.
Great job. I enjoyed how you were able to capture someone who can be both incredibly selfish and incredibly caring at the same time.
Quite a nice, quick little read.
Needs some work to appear more like a diary entry though.
Dear Spike,
Your request for a records check on Canterlot property ; ie Pantry shelf ,007 A3
Dragons egg 1ea, Date of supply XXCCLL, Vender G Smith/ Apple Acres , has been recovered Your egg was on that shelf for 57 years before Twilight Sparkles entry examination. Hope this information is useful in your back ground research.
PS. LuLu said you're too old to be dating some pony,But what does she know.
Sweet, Nice little story, A upvote and favorite from me!
You can has review!