My name's Skybreeze. I'm a Dashite who has lived my life on the ground on an island with my best friends, another Dashite named Rockcloud and a pink unicorn mare named Kayra. We lived our lives making a raft so all three of us could leave the island. But on the day the raft was ready the Enclive attacked us and we were separated. I awoke and a key shaped sword appeared before me. That's when my true adventure began. One that would bring me and my unusual new team not only across Equestria but across the whole world.
This is a crossover between my favorite part of the Brony Fandom (Fallout Equestria) and one of my top five game series ever Kingdom Hearts.
Chapters (1)
"My names Skybreeze." Don't forget the apostrophe!
Wait a minute, this writing looks familiar.
...Oh. I'll just let you focus on the other comment, then.
This is interesting. Can't wait to see what happens
Doesn't seem half-bad. I'm going to be keeping tabs on this.
interesting idea, but there are a few grammatical and spelling errors such as:
"Keyna you're the only one of us who still has their mark," should have a comma after Kenya
pegisi is pegasi
"She was the welder of loyalty and she proved that by wanting to help all as opposed to only her own species." should be "She was the wi]elder of Loyalty, and she proved that by wanting to help all as opposed to only her own species.
"Yeh," should be, "Yeah"
"Skybreeze grab your rope let's get out." should have a comma after Skybreeze
on a raft perusing," pursuing
"Hey Rockcloud nice job back there," - comma after Rockcloud
One that is not only yours or Equestrias but that of the whole world. - apostrophe in Equestrias, comma after Equestria's
There are also a few others...
But, yeah, nice story!
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Thanks I'll get on those when I'm on a computer (I'm on my Kindle right now).
If you haven't updated in at least a year, you should put the story on hiatus.
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It's almost ready. I'm just bad at time management. But I'll probably do that with my stories.
Why was this cancelled?
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Wasn’t, just never got around to actually continuing it...