Caught between a rock and a hard place, Cadence turns to Luna for some advice. However, Luna cannot always have the answers Cadence is looking for, and while it may not be perfect, she has a story to tell.
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Them tags. Dis gon b gud.
I like it.
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1st. Not bad, cant wait to read more,
2nd. GOD DAMN it regidar. I keep finding you
o/~ It's been a long day's night... And I've been working like a Diamond Dog... //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Intricacy upon intricacy. Count me in for however long it takes.
I definitely like this. You have some real nice moments between cadence and luna, and I like how she only called cadence by her first name. At first I was disappointed by the sudden ending, but a quick check to see that it's not complete makes me very happy. Before that, I was trying to glean some deeper meaning out of the ending, ha.
In my headcanon, Cadnece isn't immortal, for precisely the reason that being so means outliving shining, and I don't like that, so I simply make it not true. As it is, you've got some real good character interraction, and I'm looking forward to more between cadence and luna, the two royal sisters, and even cadence and shining. Keep it up, LUC.
Also, I always like to know: how long did it take to write this, from coneption to now??
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about three hours
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....
You don't say
...Now I'm jealous.
This is good
I respectfully ask for Moar.
And if you managed to write this in three hours you have an uncanny gift for writing.
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Interesting, plz continue.
Whaaaaat...Philomena is his name??
Well...wasn't expecting that one.
It was a good chapter, LUC--I like the mythology/world you're building, and I'm definitely interested in how Luna and Celestia fit into it. Right now they kinda seem like two unknown sisters that just went out and took out discord without any one really knowing, and I like that. Gives them more humble beginnings, instead of everypony immediately knowing who ended Discord and right away celebrating them, making Luna and Celestia their rulers, which is pretty much how I always imagined it
The ponies in the bar are all well-written and feel very real; and that song seemed familiar--is it an actual song, or did you make it up? If you wrote it, good job man.
Also, I like how majestic Philomena is (at least, I assume it's her); since her first real experience with the sisters is with Luna, it'll be interesting to see how she becomes Celestia's bird.
Keep up the good work, LUC--can't wait for more
2205220 It's an actual song- The Rocky Road to Dublin, with that last bit changed to fit the setting.
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Aha, I knew it sounded familiar! Thanks for the heads up, I appreciate it
loving this so far. Also now following so if the notification derps again I'll have a backup
The first two chapters of this look pretty interesting. Are you ever going to come back to this at any point? The story hasn't gotten much of an update since the Seattle's Angels reviews, and I understand that it's partially contradicted by Season 4.
*looks at top-right of page, sees that you haven't signed on in about two weeks*
That is, if you plan on coming back to the site.
Good chapters cant wait for more
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