Pinkie Pie builds Rainbow Dash a jetpack.
Edited by Kitsunehero
Preread by NintendoGal55
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I love this story. So hard.
Gotta move faster, faster...!
Jetpacks are fun. Who cares about safety?
Should be "Identities" or "Lives"
Should be "Led the earth pony to"
Drop the she.
Why do I never catch everything before it goes live!
Best ending to a story ever.
Woah, and yet Pinkie Pie forgot to carry the one. Wonder what might have happened if she had.
Sure it broke the Celestialprism thing buuuuuuuuuuttttttttttttttt it needs more thrust.
I am LOLing so hard right now. The sub stories made it.
That was... simply glorious.
Thank you!
This story is so relevant to my interests it's not even funny.
However, while the fact that the story is relevant to my interests is not funny, the story itself is hilarious. Nice work! Check the spelling of the word "condemned" early on and watch for a your / you're substitution in Applejack's "acting kind of funny" line.
Just remember that the red ones go faster.
1803582
even in My Little Pony. (if you watch Rainbow Dash when she's doing a speed stunt, her rainbow is predominantly red.)
1800536 That's incredibly dirty. So... so deliciously dirty. (I'm tired, cut me some slack)
1800576 "Must go faster must go faster..."
1800658 The Royal Aviation Safety Board cares. As for the errors, you commented before it was posted on the front page, so they were fixed beforehand
1800725 I don't know, the ending "and then they fucked like bunnies" is up there too.
1800846 Then her math would've been right, and she would've realized that instead of the 10:1 thrust to weight ratio that she thought the sucker had, it was actually a 100:1 thrust to weight ratio.
1800894 She was still going slower than the speed of light. Of course it needed more!
1800949 Yeah... not going to lie, the story sucked without them
1803403 Thanks! And have an "Awesome avatar" complement to you
1803511 That's what she said.
1803515 *Blinks to self* Did I... did I seriously use the wrong you're!? I... I feel dirty right now.
1803544 Wasn't entirely sure how I came up with that idea. Pinkie just thinks with portals. 'Nuff said.
1803582 Red frosting cupcakes... hmm...
1803806 Nah, just looks that way. The orange and the red blend with each other much more than the rest of the colors, especially since indigo is cut out completely (it gives violet and blue a more distinct separation).
And then the sun turned into an onion and soup rained from the heavens. A stallion looked up from the jar of preserves in which he luxuriated and, with the air of a sage imparting prophetic wisdom that would shape the fate of generations to come, pronounced, "Celestia be jelly."
1800949 Yup.
Onions?
Monopony?
Those are probably my two favourite lines. They are just so random. I have no idea how you thought of them.
Why is Twilight with a secret crush on one of the two princesses always so funny?
Haha! Hillarious! Thanks for sharing, eh!
1844192 It's true, and you know it! So many Sparity (as much as I love the ship) don't take this into account!
1844286 Even Discord would think that that was a little too chaotic at that point...
1845297 Not going to lie, when I initially thought of the Roseluck segment, that was the very first thing I thought of. I built the entire scene around that single line.
1850804 Excuse me, it's "Eeyup!"
1857818 Yes, Onion. Yes, monopony. You have booze to thank for the first, and my amazing editor to thank for the second one (I put "Monopoly", but he changed it to that.) As for the princess thing, I would say that it's because it's kinda ridiculous having that ship.
1858911 And sharing is caring!
While not as funny as I hope, it was a very well written story and it was a great thought, I very much enjoyed it, poor Rainbow Dash, surprised she did not die
You know I have never seen a Roseluck/Applejack romance before, I very much would love to read such though, background ponies being paired with the Mane Six need to appear more. The scene with Twilight was funny as hell, loved it, though I'm not one for Twilight/Celestia but I do like Twilight/Luna.
You did seriously very well, I'm really impressed and much enjoyed it
O.O
Figures Rainbow Dash loved this to an insane degree, she loves going fast, and this was faster than ever.