I've seen worse, though Dusk swearing strikes me as wrong I can understand why you wanted to make a bit more of a change. I'll keep an eye on it for now. Good luck with the rest.
This is getting a much better reception than I anticipated. I always thought I was a terrible writer. Huh, at least it seems I can make a story half-readable. Anyway, this probably won't be updated very fast as I suffer from a condition known as extreme writer's block.
Side note: REGIDAR READ THIS! OH MY GOD I'M GOING TO EXPLODE IN TO CONFETTI AN FLY OUT THE WINDOW! *ahem* uhhh... carry on
Huh, haven't checked in much to the gender swap versions of them. Curious to see more of this play out. You know, in hindsight, its funny, Twilight tried to warn the princess of impending danger, and her response letter basically comes right down to
(Joke) Alt. Title: Pony Bucker 63⅓
Kinky.
Is alright. Just some grammar issues.
I've seen worse, though Dusk swearing strikes me as wrong I can understand why you wanted to make a bit more of a change. I'll keep an eye on it for now. Good luck with the rest.
1797087 Im gonna make sure to keep that to a minimum fro dusk, he was just getting angry at spike. I do see rainbow blitz having a dirty mouth though
1796042 you made me laugh sir, have a mustache
This is getting a much better reception than I anticipated. I always thought I was a terrible writer. Huh, at least it seems I can make a story half-readable. Anyway, this probably won't be updated very fast as I suffer from a condition known as extreme writer's block.
Side note: REGIDAR READ THIS! OH MY GOD I'M GOING TO EXPLODE IN TO CONFETTI AN FLY OUT THE WINDOW! *ahem* uhhh... carry on
Huh, haven't checked in much to the gender swap versions of them. Curious to see more of this play out. You know, in hindsight, its funny, Twilight tried to warn the princess of impending danger, and her response letter basically comes right down to
"Go make some friends"
Sounds pretty blunt for the princess.