• Member Since 1st Jul, 2012
  • offline last seen Yesterday

Avenging-Hobbits


A nerd who thought it would be cool to, with the help of a few equally insane buddies adapt the entire Marvel Universe (with some DC Comics thrown in for kicks) with My Little Pony...wish me luck

T
Source

A monster. A freak.
A weapon. A failure.

Fluttershy is all of these and none of these. She simply wants to be left alone. But turning into a giant green monster more often then not prevents that.

This is her story.

In the same universe as Iron Mare and Soar, but you don't have to have read those to read this...

Rated Teen for Action Violence and dark themes (such as depression/mental illness and such)

Proofread by Dave Man 1000, Spideremblembrony and CluelessBrony.

Chapters (20)
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!
Comments ( 615 )

Bronyman, WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME WITH ALL OF THESE STORIES?! WHY CAN I NOT HOLD ALL OF THESE FANFICTIONS?! :fluttercry: :flutterrage:

Well... yes it is dark, but people tend to do weird things when your split-personality can rip an entire city to shreds
you have my track

And where is the frozen body of Captain Equestia?

2091070 Would you believe I seriously considered mentioning it but no matter how I wrote it it seemed forced?

Some stuff just works better in a movie then in a book.

2091062 AND MY AXE

(Random LOTR reference)

And thank you! I hope I don't disappoint.

Wow....dark, damn. Fluttershy does not deserve tihs....that is sad, but it needed to be done...not that it worked. I written much, much darker but then again I'm almost a master at dark and tragic :rainbowlaugh: I love this story....wonder where Angel is though:facehoof:

What have you done to Fluttershy :raritydespair:

Wow...Flutter's family has a serious mental problem, how odd. And damn, Wing Wing:rainbowlaugh: That would be an awful last name to have:facehoof: Think I remember Firefly but this makes me wonder what had caused Flutter's......darker alter ego. You know I'm down, this is going to be the shit:yay:

2091263 Oh a lot of things will cause it.:pinkiecrazy:

All in all it's just another brick in the wall....:pinkiecrazy:

2091269 :rainbowlaugh: Then I shall wait for the badassness that is your writing skills to prove such:twilightsmile:

2091281 Well, remember, I am working on Soar at the same time.

I try to alternate the two, so probably Soar will get updated first....

2091287 Very true and I think I got your Iron Mare mixed up with another of the same title, to be honest, I'm not a fan of Rarity so to tell the truth, I shall not be reading said fic, I will however read the second chapter of Soar right now:twilightsmile:

2091322 Oh, so you've only read the Prologue?

And it's okay if you didn't read Iron Mare. I'd like it if you did (if only so you could review it) so that way, when we finally reach The Avengers, you know where she is in her path of life....

Ah yeah, more avenger style ponies coming!

Wow, you used the alternate opening to the Incredible Hulk movie. This is going to make things a bit interesting...:fluttershysad:

2091467 Yes I did.

You still up for proofreading?

jz1

Interesting. I appear to be the only one to not find this all that dark, (although that may be because I just re watched the Avengers and remember Banner saying that "He spat it [the bullet] out.") and instead focus on the fact that you used the vocal version of the theme song to M*A*S*H as both the title and as the closing statement.

2092075 Yes I did.

It was the only song I could think of.

I obviously don't listen to much music dealing with suicide.

Nice going Banner Wing, you're going to turn Fluttershy into the hulk.

Saw the title, and immediately thought of this

Good for no Hassumpheffer, not good for Banner planning to turn Flutters into the Hulk

Uh-oh, this will not end well for any pony.:fluttershyouch:

Still, nice update and great Rarity cameo in this chapter.:raritywink:

I do wonder if it's all connected in someway or form ?

Keep up the good work.:yay:

2106249 Well, Rarity's cameo was just that, a cameo, she won't take any part in this story beyond that.

However, there will be various characters from other stories as I go.

I still haven't figured out how to do a Stan Lee cameo here....

2106734

Janitor scene? Pointing and yelling?

2112616

I take it you like that show?

2113320 From the little I've seen of it yes....

2113451

Its hilarious.

The Hulk episode is great too

Soup!!!!! You turned Fluttershy into the hulk!!

2117165 Well, techincally, it's only a qusi-hulk out (no green skin or transformation).

But don't worry, you'll get some Flutterhulk action next chapter (I hope.)

Just noticed something:

“Dear Celestia…” Principle Notebook whispered.

Shouldn't it have been "Dear Faust", seeing as that's what it's been in the other stories.

2117221 Actually, I've been meaning to address that.

In Equestria (which is Earth), Celestia has become a mythical figure, since it's been so long since she's had anything to do with them.

In Equingard, Faust is Celestia's great, great, great, great (add a few more greats) grandmother and founder of Equinsgard. Thereby her name has also become almost mythological in nature.

I'll address that in Soar though.

Sorry for the confusion.

2117273
I also recall a moment in Iron Mare, Rarity uses "Faust" at one point when she's falling after the ice build up.

2117314 O.o oh you're right.....better go fix that.

Of course that was before I had figured out the whole system yet, so I guess you could say it was a mistake.

aw Fluttershy :fluttercry:
oh, is this supposed to be dumped

a-already d-dumbed m-me

he suddenly bobbed Fluttershy

and that bopped?

I have to say that despite what happen, you can't say that Dark Sky deserved what's coming to him for bullying Fluttershy like that. :fluttershysad:

I mean what's wrong with a school where the teachers will not come to the student's aid in the hallways ?:fluttershyouch:

Still interesting origin for he anger of Fluttershy. Yet, even Fluttershy must realize that you cannot avoid getting angry forever, right ?:fluttershyouch:

2118354 You would not believe some of the stuff bullies get away with.

Login or register to comment
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!