This is my first fanfic so tell me what you think! Please forgive me. It probably has been done before but I was on vacation and it popped into my head. Couldn't think of title.
Twilight has just read about a new spell, she thinks it will come in use and can't wait to show the her friends. But it backfires on them, causing the mane six to revisit with their foalhoods...
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Looks like an interesting read while my story goes through moderation. I'll try it.
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Interesting idea.
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Well so far it seems like nothing happened, I think you should have waited and published another chapter before you submitted this.
But that cover image is very daw inducing, and filly Pinkie Pie scares me.
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i don't get it, why is Spike banned from buying ice-cream and if his the only one who likes that ice-cream then why are are they getting more ice-cream and why dose a cake shop sell ice-cream? i get there sell cakes with ice-cream in it but just ice-cream? (was that why spike was banned as he got march ice-cream before they put it in the cakes so they didn't get to make that many ice-cream cakes?)
grate story i can't wait to read more X3
Why would the Cake's ban Spike from buying more ice cream? That's a terrible business decision!
Well the reason that Spike can't have any ice cream is that he keeps getting so much that everytime the store gets more ice cream it's always gone. Spike buys the store's whole supply. And anyway dragons and sugar don't mix well. (sorry I didn't clarify it in my story I was just really eager to finish it.) Still might not make sense.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Honey, I Regressed The Mane Six
Well this can't be good, Twilight is about to be thrust into early motherhood.
Let the headaches begin.
I was listening to the song 'Feel Again' while writing the first chapter. So I kinda thought 'Yeah, we're foals again!'
Well chapters don't seem to be moving very fast but as they say good things do come to those that wait.
Story needs serious editing. The plot is a little too contrived, moves too fast.
hm... I always thought it was Rainbow Dash, not Rainbowdash.
Ya know I've actually never considered that. I'm pretty sure that your right. It's Rainbow Dash. Thanks.
1889707 Agreed, Rarity and Rainbow Dash could at least have seperate chaptes dedicated to their escapeds.
1891465 hey :D. I am Children of the Night. i was once mariokartIsEpic. I made a story like this. Here's the link
I see potential in this story