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When the once proud ruler of the Crystal Empire is turned into nothing more but a colt, he must question how to deal with the sudden loss of power, and figure out how he's going to return to being the tyrant he once was.
Thanks for proofreading the first part of this for me goes to Rust and ABronyLife42.
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Have a thumbs up while i go to sleep... Im sure this will be awesome.
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Do you ever say any other thing?
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CRAP
1727587 That's third.
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I know
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take at least a cool firsties gif
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I wish
What's huh?
1727613 Everypony do the
! Everypony do the 
! Now, everypony do the 
! YEAH!
Commence read.
Ha, this is great seeing Sombra in such a childish way, but you had some... odd adjectives. 'Cute back', well, can a back be cute? Is there some quality that makes a back cute? Also, 'his tattered cape slightly ripped and completely harmless.' Great imagery, obviously, but I don't see how a cape would be harmful to begin with. These are just mere nitpicks, though, and I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.
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1727585>>1727644>>1727642>>1727627>>1727626>>1727601>>1727645 Um........ I said, EVERYPONY do the
! Now, EVERYPONY do the 
! Yeah, EVERYPONY do the 
!
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WHY AM I EVEN STILL AWAKE?!?!?!
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1727664 What?
1727667 I BUCKING SAID!!!!!! EVERYPONY DO THE BUCKING
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW DO IT! DO THE 
!!!!!!!!! DO THE 
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1727676 BUCKING DO IT! DO THE
! EVERYPONY DO THE 
! THE 
, YEAH, THE 
!
1727690 I don't know what a
is
What's with this comment thread?
Anyway, seems written well enough, though I'm reminded too much of DragonBall GT for me to make a judgement just yet.
This story is defiantly going to be good. Little child Sombra is going to be a handful.
1727753>>1727758 Thank you for commenting on the fiction.
1727644 Thank you for commenting on the story, not just randomly saying
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1727806 Rated everyone fiction. Please refrain from cursing.
Dawwwwww soooo cute i can imagine baby sombra. Great story and awesome details.
maybe you can read my story called my day in ponyville
Why is the like/dislike ratio so poor?
...
Are the remnants of the TWE being butthurt again, but this time in reverse?
1727865 No, nobody likes King Sombra... I guess...
Well, I like this. I'd like to see what Sombra will grow (again) into.
Please continue.
1727874 I don't understand it this is a good fic with good grammar, story, and summary.
Seriously, what the hell is up with all the dislikes so fast?
1727897 IDL IDC any more. I liked writing this, so... screw it.
1727874 I do
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Really the grammer is good, and it's interesting to see how this story will progress.
I have no idea why there are so many dislikes.
1727938 I liked him... but this is the second fic of mine that got so many down votes in a matter of minutes...
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Never and
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I agree
How do I put this....I'm going to be nice and decide to wait for the second chapter before I give it an up or down vote.
Well I have noticed one mistake on the story...if you don't mind me posting it...
I am confused if you meant Celestia or Sombra...I think you mean Sombra since you have the he in there. However the story is pretty good and gives us a...What if scenario on the whole sombra case since the horn was never explained and could be done as such. I wonder how will the mane six will react towards it. Anyhow I don't know why people would hate it because...there is really nothing to hate on it. My opinion...and i could be wrong on this since it is only an opinion, maybe they are comparing it to My Little dashie?:rainbowhuh. I am not sure if that is the case but I mean...it is a possibility.
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I'M GOING TO DOWNVOTE YOU *deep inhale*
AND THEN I'M GOING TO KILL YOU *deep inhale*
UNTIL YOU'RE DEAD! *fart*
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1727813 Sorry. Do the
? O and btw, were you in any way involved with the takedown of the TWE? That may be where the dislikes are coming from. That or u need a really good editor. I haven't read it yet, so......
1727908 Hey, don't just give up. If you liked writing it, screw everyone else. Doesn't make sense why people would dislike this; it's a perfectly normal, cute story. They're just a bunch of jealous haters, doing it for the 'lulz'.
This story doesn`t deserve to have all the dislikes it`s got. Even I liked it, and I don`t really like cute things.
Oh god, the level of idiocy in the top comments of this story....
baby Sombra is a rather hilarious idea.
1728677 IKR!!!