In which Trixie explains just why you should never trust a wheel.
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hahaha
Wheels are the new Barrels.
1724223 BARRELS
1724241
FAHKING BARRELS!
Oh god this was hilarious. Absolute gold. I hope this fic goes on to greatness; I shall do my part to do so. Have a like and fav. Oh yeah, and my seal of approval for being thoroughly awesome:
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Trixie was so embarrased and she started crying, spaghetti leaked from her every orifice.
Was good story.
You know... I don't blame her.
Trixie is such a stinker
That was wonderful!
1724241>>1724245
I KNEW IT!
Dat ending
I wasn't expecting that ending
this is brilliant; i could see it getting featured.
hehe loved this!
The final sentence needs closing quotation marks. Other than that, really funny. I love Trixie.
DAT LAST SENTEANSH.
I LOL'd so hard I woke up my Mom
Ending punchlines are best punchlines.
Seriously, Trixie should look into making that Flashback Screen larger for outdoor showings. Trixie: inventor of the drive-in!
I was getting really sad until I got to the end.
And that ending punchline... genius!
1724223 1724241 1724245 Barrels? I don't get it.
1724248 Good, good, let the wheels flow through you.
1724249 Thank you! But spaghetti? I don't quite get it.
1724312 Nuuu uh! I love Trixie!
1724441 Thanks for that, I really do hope it gets featured, buuuut I don't think it will.
But that's fine, thank you for liking it. :D
1724580 Whew! Oh man do I hate grammatical mistakes. It's been fixed! Thank you VERY much.
1724607 Glad to hear it.
hope you didn't get in trouble though.
1724669 I theorize she already invented drive-ins. How else did she afford that amulet in the first place?
1724707 I didn't think the ending woud go over as well as it did, so thank you!
1724714
Glad you liked it!
Ok that ending was just fantastic XD
Haha, this has been excelent!
Why didnt I see this coming, considering how Trixie is?
Trixie, Snips and Snails are probably the only fans you have right now...
spin da wheel pewdie!
1725972 are you making a PewDiePie reference? Be careful, the Tobuscus fans will retaliate!
1724768 It's a 4chan thing that started in 2009... hard to understand it is, but they make it work.
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I was thinking...... Is this the actual reason why she hates them so much?
That was a lot funnier than I was expecting.
And I was expecting quite a bit.
OK, this was pretty damn good. I cracked up during the episode when Trixie said she didn't trust wheels. This story was funny, until I got to the end. And then it was hilarious.
Hope you don't mind some corrections (this story has no other problems, so grammar is the only thing I can pick on):
"Trixie trot back over" -> "trotted" (don't get confused with "trod" which is the past tense of "tread")
"interrupt a magicians grand exit" -> "magician's"
"the pain of one thousand years starvation and drought" -> "years of starvation"
"some anger already edging it's way in." -> "its"
"It wasn't a spell she perfected yet" -> "she had perfected" (past perfect)
" budding before the fans eyes." -> "the fans' eyes"
"As the third petal ignite, it set off" -> "ingited"
"just to make sure the flaming mass no longer exist." -> "existed"
"The mares, the stallions, even the little filly's" -> "fillies"
"She said aloud to herself, as she often does." -> "often did"
"It's too bad Trixie forgot that she purchased the best trailer" -> "she had purchased"
"bouncing of the tree back to whence it came" -> "off" and "back whence" (there's no need for "to" or "from" when using "whence")
Hilarious!
Haha, that's a good one.
I only really had one problem with this, other than that you need another proofreading check.
>bare as a Cutie Mark Crusader
Implying that Sweetie Belle, Scoots, and Apple Bloom are all bald. You might have used "foal's flank" or some derivative of that.
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Its a joke from PewDiePie on YouTube. He has a hatred for barrels for unknown reasons.
Alright I'm going to be honest here. I read the whole story, because it has such good ratings. Plus it has comedy, so I would be expecting to laugh alot, right? I didn't laugh once. No offense, it's probably just me. Maybe it's because I never saw the new Trixie episode, but I don't see how that would change my view that much. Don't feel disheartened though. It's still a well-written story, but I guess just not my type.
Maybe THAT'S what caused Trixie to face plant at the end of the episode, she tripped over a wheel.
Trixie: "DUMB WHEEL!"
Rarity and Sweetie Belle: (Both of them are holding a baseball bat in their hooves)"That's MY line!"
Rarity: "What do you mean it's your line I said it first!"
Sweetie Belle: "No you didn't!"
Like a spy.
1724768 Nope, she just came to check that nothing was wrong. :P
1726156 hmm the discord in me wants to instigate an argument, though at the same Time I don't....
what to do, what to do
1724768
... Rock Farm? ...
I don't think anybody actually likes Snips and Snails, it's like they're the opposite of The Cutie Mark Crusaders.
This fic was great, but here is my reason for why Trixie doesn't trust wheels.
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She was planning on returning in season 2, but lost at Wheel of Fortune and had to work for cash.
Trixie: "The great and Powerful Trixie would like to solve. Clearly the answer is: Suck it, Twilight."
Pat pinched the bridge of his nose in irritation and let out a deep sigh. "For the last time, it is not 'Suck it, Twilight' and the category is famous place."
Months Later
Snips: "Wouldn't it be easier if it had wheels?"
Trixie looks upon the young colt in annoyance. "The Great and Powerful Trixie doesn't trust wheels."
I hate Snips and Snails too. Especially if they crushed my house with a Ursa Minor
1726575 Wow, that's...intense? Made me
in any case.
1726772 Well I'm glad to exceed expectations!
1726776 YOU...you are just...the best kind of person. I always re-read my chapters/stories three times before i submit them, but something always slips! Thank you, you rock.
1727543 Hey, not everything is for everyone, and I get that. Still though, if you watch the episode, it may change your perspective. Hell, watch the episode anyway because it's phenomenal!
1728323 You win a mustache. Here you go.
1728990 I enjoy both PewDiePie and Tobuscus. Haven't seen Nova or Captain yet though.
1729181 That's definitely one alternative. I imagine Trixie doesn't have much good luck...
1729212 Well boy do I have a surprise for you!
1729336 I'm a robaz, pewdie, and cry fan
they are the only ones I have seen
that wheel was a true bro
1729336
A last thing on Trixie and wheels.
Meanwhile, at Ghost Fort
THE WHEEL!! Come on, wheel. Trixrasmus needs this. UUUUUUUBERCHHHHARGE!! MAGIC!! IT IS AN EXACT SCIENCE!!
*appears at that very moment*
DAMN YOU, WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL!!
You have created a work of art. I salute you.
*walking home*
I know that our farm let Trixie perform, but I didn't get to see! Dang it! *notices flaming and demolished area in what was supposed to be a clearing*
...
My tree! It's on fire! *runs off from giant burning used-to-be-Trixie-performing-cart*
1729336 as a man who has meet Pewdiepie i can say hes a damn ass hole.
One imagines the image of Trixie sitting in a fishing boat, with a little motor pulling it along, line over the side ...
Welcome to Discord's Domain. Enjoy your stay in the chaos capital of the world. Oh, and there's no way out. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
The ending is so very much 'old Trixie
'. I guess she can't have changed much over the day-or-so between her defeat and leaving Ponyville again, but if she tried to say anything else, she'd have had the chance to find out just what Nightmare Moon had been doing on the moon the previous thousand years.