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Sparx


I write fics, often late at night. Some folk like them. Also I like to use the word 'Aye' when I speak.

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Spike finally decides to reveal his feelings for the pony he cares about, and nothing could possibly be better.

This isn't exactly full of a huge amount of conflict, it's mostly a sappy lovey dovey romance story for one of the cutest ships I've ever seen, because I'm a big sap and sucker.

Also if you're looking for the more... "spicy" scenes. They can be located here.

Cover art is My Little Spikey Wikey by Alexusprime, thanks to Deep Pond for pointing that out.

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 331 )

Looks and sounds adorable :rainbowkiss: Will read later.

~Have a savvy day! :coolphoto:~

(p.s.:..... FIRST!)

ABOUT BUCKING TIME!!! :rainbowlaugh: But seriously, good work. Flows well and it leaves me wanting to read more out of it

I'm looking forward to this :D

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Hey! Pssst! It's called "Road to El Dorado":rainbowkiss:

Lovey dovey Sparity story eh? I'm in! They're usually nice and this feels like it's headed that way too.:pinkiesmile:

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:derpytongue2:

Carousel Boutique is a proper name and should be capitalized, you also missed capitalizing Spike twice, and you had some repetition. Overall, this seems to be going quite well.

This looks like a really good story so far. Though you do need to capitalize Carousel Boutique and you missed capitalizing Spike's name twice in the story. Aside from that, a really good start and I hope to see more soon. :raritywink:

Well this looks pretty decent. Nothing revolutionary, as you said, but off to a solid start.

The cover art is My Little Spikey Wikey, by Alexusprime.

Great start for a story. I want to read more chapters.

This is pretty awesome, keep up the good work! :eeyup:

Sir/madam you have my attention this fic has much promise I would love to see where this goes.

Nice start to an interesting story. Do keep up the good work upon such a great idea like this one. :raritywink:

All I can say is... "about bucking time"

I love this story so far, but when's the next chapter?:fluttercry::twilightangry2:

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Sorry, scratch that. There'll be a bit of a delay.

2123581 oh... Oh we'll! I've waited this long right? A little delay doesn't matter!:pinkiehappy: especially for this story!

thanks for making my day! :heart:

Dear Luna,
Don't send letters on how to date a mare when you're with the mare.
-Spike

Luna and Celestia are stalkers... Well, whatever, it worked out for the best in the end certainly. I do enjoy a excellent date scene.

Good to see a continuation to this. I hope to see more from this story soon. :moustache::heart::raritywink:

218343What do expect when your immortal and live in a castle with a telescope that can see for miles:trollestia:, lol. Nice date and it doesn't look like anyone's going to sleep anytime soon.:moustache::raritywink:

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I always happen to miss something. Thanks for pointing that out for me.

Awww, this is turning out to be such a sweet story :scootangel:

And the CMC's have a new trio to watch out for :unsuresweetie:, RPSS - royal pony sister stalkers :trollestia:

Aw, That Luna is such a sweetheart deep down. :pinkiehappy:

Nice update, I cannot wait to see more of this tale. :raritywink:

Ah... Nice, fluffy Sparity to warm the heart :twilightsmile: Really glad this was continued. Can't wait to see what's in stored for the cute couple :twilightsheepish:

M-my masculine's tears.

11 weeks for a chapter less than 2000 words, I'm not disappointed by any means, it was a very nice chapter, I'm just wondering about the delay...

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1. I'm lazy
2. I absolutely HATE forcing a story if I don't know where to take it, and that happened a number of times on this one.
3. I'm lazy
4. I've had a few family commitments come up whenever I sit down to start writing.
5. I'm lazy
6. I've got other stories that I've been working on, sometimes a bit more diligently than this one
7. I'm Lazy
8. My younger brother and I discovered the joys of Borderlands 2........ sorry.
9. I'm seriously lazy

2187702 I do t really care how long it took, like I said before rarity and spike stories are amazingly beautiful. But this one is how it actually seems like it would happen, ehich makes it even better!:raritywink: :pinkiehappy: :moustache:

Imagine what all the other ponies that look up at the sky are thinking... lol.:moustache:

Lyra: Oh man what a beautiful...
*insert dancing spike and rarity stars here*
Lyra: erm... night?

2187702 *insert joke about being lazy*

Okay, NOW I'm into the groove of things. Expect more chapters soon everypony.:raritystarry:

I love you!:heart::raritywink:

Twilight's "it's been a few hours" is a bit odd. It says in the story that is been months since they went to Canterlot and it doesn't sound ad if it's been hours since they announced they were saying either.So what had been a few hours exactly?

"I believe it went something like this..." Rarity stood on her hind legs, slowly pulling Spike's head closer until their lips finally met once again. Before Spike could fully lose himself though, Rarity pulled away. "We've got some 'shopping' to do."

Hello, see-through, purple, gem-coated lingerie!!! :raritystarry::raritystarry:

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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yeah i kind of thought the same thing...

although i love this chapter!
I wonder if you'll afford their "fist time" (In that same way Twilight meant at first, oh my I laught at that, I was thinking the same thing "Oh my gosh what did I miss a paragraph??") on future chapters, I guess? :raritystarry:

:moustache::heart::raritywink:

2228271 I wondered this too, then I realised it. It's Spike's birthday, at the age dragons become adults. It was breakfast time, so it had ony been a few hours since he became an adult and was legally able to... do that. I'm pretty sure that's what Twilight was referring to.

2228271 I wondered this too, then I realised it. It's Spike's birthday, at the age dragons become adults. It was breakfast time, so it had ony been a few hours since he became an adult and was legally able to... do that. I'm pretty sure that's what Twilight was referring to.

Power over the stars and moon themselves: Play matchmaker

Nice chapter, Twilight was implying sex right? I don't know why but I was thinking she thought he proposed to her...

Smooth move there Twilight, smooth move. :facehoof:

Twilight's glare was causing spike to sink into his chair, eyes spinning in confusion. Missed a capitalization on Spike.

Wonderful chapter. I laughed my ass off, and, I don't care what they say, the other girls, or some at least, made the same mistake as Twi. :rainbowlaugh:

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