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Trixie was defeated. The Amulet of the Alicorn and its deadly curse was taken away and hidden where nopony would ever find it in their unfortunate hooves again...
But Trixie will find that such a magical artifact's power doesn't depart from one so easily as that.
She will learn the true power of the Alicorn's Curse, as well as the pain that it brings.
Maybe somepony else will too.
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Glad to see another one of your works
I'm liking this original concept. I hope the epilogue will reveal all.
Wait, this is a one-two chapter thing? I was kinda looking forward to the next chapters.
very intriguing. from the way this set the stage, I'm not sure a happy ending is in sight, but I hope there is one
Wait there will only be two chapters? Seems quite short... But readers can't be choosers (see what I did there =P ) there is still room more the story line to be expanded beyond two chapters... Like it could turn in to an eventual twixy ship or just have them end up as friends after a while a fair while mind you. So many possibilitys all waiting to be used...
WOW. JUST WOW.
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Glad to see your back to writing. I loved it, can't wait for the next chapter!
I missed this type of writing
welcome back CH Cant wait for nexxt Chapter 
Alright! Trixie is always up for dark walks of revenge as it seems. Now, I'm just curious whether Trixie is still.. Trixie, walking around with an ill mind or she's getting controlled entirely by fragments of that ..thing.
The epilogue may should be called chapter two instead.
Aaand mistakes:
-- highhlights and veiw
-- How can When become Wem?
-- Missing a space there. Duh!
I'm not sure whether it's my browser is doing it or not (although I tested it with FF and Opera), but there are double-spaces all over the place.
like:
and..
-- Each * shows where double-spaces are used. These are just examples, it goes through the whole chapter.
1876184 You are supposed to use two spaces after every end of sentence thing as well as elipses (...)
I'll fix the other errors though.
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Oh, well. As a classical handwriter I never thought about setting a double space anywhere. It just wouldn't make sense, since it would be hardly recognizable. But now, hearing of such a rule I went through my grammar, punctuation and style books. Against my believe there were nothing about that written down at all. Google told me then that it's somehow oldschool and that double-spacing between sentences is somehow a contentious point, so I'm sorry to have reported more errors than necessary.
Still, that feels odd..
Is the incomplete tag intentional.. because, well... epilogue and all.
Hope whatever is weighing on your mind gets resolved with relative ease.
That was a certainly fast update..
And now I'm just even more confused.. Did the nightmare jump over from Trixie to Twilight, granting her the same abilities and curses as to Trixie or is it just, as I like to call it, a fragment that's in Twilight's heart. Despair?
Or is it something as a higher rule, is there a strict need for successors of the gods and the ..thing was copied by Trixie into Twilight's mind to carry on her burden? As an act of deepest hate, yet deepest love?
Baah!
Wow.
Just wow.
Since no one posted it yet...
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Will Twilight have to do the whole "kill innocents to stay sane" thing that Trixie did?
It will definitely fulfill the dark sad tag if she does ...
TRIXIE DIED?!
DID TWILIGHT HAVE TO KILL TRIXIE TO SAVE HER??!!
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WAAAAAH!!!
1878125 That is for you to decide. The fic is complete.
Wow this fic mad me sad..............................dang I have to give it one of my Medals
Silver Medal
Clanned Badge
Awarded to a story for having a great amount of feels.
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Thank you!
It hath been decided that Twilight hath avoided the mistakes that Trixie fell into and has ascended into the New Alicorn of the Stars destined to rule the night sky with Luna.
Shortly after Flying off into the sunset (or is it sunrise ... i forget...) to Twilight's Royal Library , Ponyville Branch, Twilight and Luna have copious amounts of makeouts and sex (or book reading, whatever they feel like doing at the time).
And they all lived happily ever after...
until Celestia caught them ... and made them get married ... then end
Hey! all the other fics end like this!
I'm kinda a sucker for happy endings ... (Not that kind! Pervert!)
I... All my feels...
bugger its over...
still this is a rather good ending all things considered... oh well nice story anyway...
Oh damn. Poor trixie
Loved the story... all these feels.
Trixie is Luna's daughter?
Well that's a bit of a twist.
I'm sad now.
"Feels shot!"