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ThePwnzorMuffin


Inconsistent story writer with too many half-baked and outdated ideas.

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Fluttershy finds herself in Canterlot, along with Rarity.

Well, not exactly "with" Rarity. The problem is, Rarity doesn't seem to know that Fluttershy is there.

Fluttershy will need a lot of paper, a fair amount of luck, and a little bit of magic to capture Rarity's attention.

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Comments ( 14 )

Hm, I know what this is based off of.

1717943 Back again.

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I'm gonig to guess it's based off that short film "paperman", that's at the beggining of Wreck-it Ralph, right?:ajsmug:

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Oh you.

This was adorable! I love Rarity and Fluttershy and Paperman. :heart:

Just a note: you slipped up and used Hands.

She gripped the offending object in her hand, moving it out of the way, cringing when she saw Rarity’s face.

I am too tired to continue but i will be back to finish later.

I have no context on Paperman. (Just an FYI)

This is a curious almost eerie piece (With the total lack of dialogue), and for me it seems it could be shipping or not, it works both ways.

Perhaps it is the lack of knowing what "Paperman" is or is supposed to represent, but it seemed like the piece was all one big intro to another story, it establishes an emotional feeling for Fluttershy and what she wants (what ever that may be), and makes Rarity seem elusive though she is not trying to be.

It was interesting.

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Paperman is a Pixar short that shows in the beginning of Wreck-It Ralph. Pretty much the same thing happens, except it's two humans, and one's a guy. Not a bad little movie, either.

Got one word 4 this fic: genius :raritywink:

Adorable and sweet- I didn't realize the lack of dialogue until the end. Well done, author. :raritywink:

not a bad adaptation of paperman. :pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:/5

This story is good i wish it was deeper but am not one to complain:pinkiesad2:

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