While conducting some late-night research for an assignment from the princess Twilight Sparkle is sidetracked by a book entitled 'Dear Princess Luna'. Upon analysis the young mare finds herself reading the story of her life...if Princess Luna took Princess Celestia's place as her tutor. As Twilight reads on and on she begins to realise how conflicted as to how lucky...or unlucky she had been to be taught by Celestia.
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Oh, now this is interesting! Can't wait for more.
Woah, this is a new and unique take on everything. Definitely interested! Keep up the great work.
Looks like an interesting premise. I hope, though, it doesn't turn into a story where you just swap Celestia and Luna, and there's some kind of significant difference between them.
Good story so far.
I am a little concerned with the blocks of text I am seeing. Each time someone speaks, it is a new paragraph. Each time Twilight says no, you start a new paragraph. It makes it easier on us readers and it doesn't overwhelm us with huge blocks of text.
Can't wait to see where this goes.
MY EYES!
bREAK UP YOUR STORY MAN
You, sir, have caught my interest. You are my first ever tracked story. Can't wait for more.
EDIT: Corrected import issues and grammar spacing.
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Ah yes, thanks for pointing that out to me. I'm an english student so I can naturally agree with this point. Correcting it now~
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Thank you, I hope this story proves a worthwhile read for you.
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Sorry, don't think that that's how I always right; I forgot that GDocs doesn't convert perfectly. Corrected grammar now.
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That is the basic principle but you and I both know that would be lazy, plagueristic and boring. No, I can promise you that it won't be just like that; there will be points in the story that cross but most of it will be originally made. After all, if they switched places originally there would be little chance of the same events ever happening.
Aha, thanks for reading~
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Ahaha, I'm glad I caught your interest so early; I never expected to have this much feedback already
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Well, I was dragging my legs but now that I know so many people are looking forward to it I'm going to pick up the pace for sure.
Interesting. Tracking to get more
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Ahaha, thanks, I'll try my best to provide you all with some more soon~
Ooo, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Tracking, I am definitely interested.
NOTE - This chapter is fairly close to the original; that's the purpose but the next chapter will include some huge differences in comparison.
172584 Aha, thank you; I'll try not to disappoint with future chapters.
172584 No worries for that; I'll try to get it done fairly soon.
Tracking, likely going to be a 5-Star story if you keep this up.
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You think so? Well thanks 8D I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
I think this is one of, if not the first time I've seen someone do this, switching which sister went evil and got sealed away. I am eagerly awaiting further additions to this story, and I hope you add a part 2 soon.
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Really? Cool~ I'm surprised nobody did this sooner. I'm about three quarters of the way through chapter 3 as we speak
My land. I can't see this ending well.
But seriously, great story. I'm looking forward to the next update!
204626 Aha, thank you; I'm trying my best to finish up.
Intriguing. The Elements are in a very different place than they were in Canon. I can't wait to see where you take this.
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[Spoilers of published chapter]
Well in canon they were in that same ruin when Twi & friends went for it. I imagine Celestia didn't collect the elements out of remorse for banishing NMM. My idea is that Luna would instead spend as much of her free time and resources trying to find a way to restore Dayflash into Celestia once more so of course she would've gone back to collect the elements from where she left them. That's why the elements aren't there at the end of chapter 2. The mane 6 do state that they had been there before to collect the elements.
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far
281311 No, what I meant was a different metaphysical place. I know they're in the same physical location. But they aren't friends, and Twilight has had to unlovingly tolerate them for years already. I'm not sure she can wield her Element as things stand.
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Ah, I was hoping that somebody would say that and it took people a while. Congrats on being the one to pipe it up~
Oh, and thanks for clearing up my confusion there
Heavy Likes dis new story....MOAR!
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Heavy might have to wait for a while I continue it.
Perhaps in the meantime you could treat yourself to a sandvich?
403666 Mrhm...The idea of many sandvichs' sounds good to Heavy......
I Will wait.
this story has soo much potential i love it .. i cant wait to see what the real celestia and luna have to say about the book if twilight shows them it.
More please.
Looking like a good price of fun.
Okay, this was quite a good read.
So many things I would like to give respect for, but I think my most favorite was the way you altered how Luna handles the upcoming return of Celestia. I like how, instead of Celestia's Zanatos Gamble with making each of the Mane 6 an important officer of the celebration so that Twilight would HAVE to meet them (except for Pinkie, it seems, but I assume Celestia knew Pinkie wouldn't fail to introduce herself to the new pony), Luna takes a more direct approach. It showcases how Luna is a little more hands-on and involved in her subjects lives (and thus at least comes off as more compassionate for them), but doesn't have the same level of mastery over the natural magic in Equestria.
You did a great job taking a story we already know, keeping the familiarity of it, but changing enough to make it interesting.
Great work all around.
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What, Ain't Scout choking you right now?
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Did you seriously just reply to an 11 year old comment? And no he’s not, how could a tiny scout choke Heavy? Impossible.