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StoryBirth


Just an author of various fics here. I'll probably update this later...

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Originally made for the Writer's Training Ground, this is an awesome adaptation of just what would happen if the Mane 6 sang Queen's epic song. Technically not a songfic.

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Queen. Me gusta.

Pretty awesome :yay: ...I wonder if we could find someone to animate this? :trixieshiftright:

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:QUEEN RULES, OMG THIS IS SO FUCKING AWESOME I AM ABOUT TO EXPLODE WITH EPICNESS :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush::ajsmug:

That ending... See? This is what apple does to you people!

1710795
Just dont do it on the carpet. Just had it cleaned





1710788
While this would be awesome, animators are hard to come by from my experience

IF ANY ANIMATORS ARE READING THIS, HINT HINT!

1710885 just did, you don't know man i am a huge Queen fan, when i saw this i instantly turned on Bohemian Rhapsody on my Ipod and Blasted it as i read along. There is no higher epicness than that :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

CIA

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I shall DEFINITELY read this later! :pinkiehappy:

This was pretty damn great. In fact, that whole album is great.

I wonder how ponies play guitar?:rainbowhuh:

1710924

It's dreams! You ain't gotta explain shit!

1710924 I did have an idea that the mane 6 would form a band that would be like The Beach Boys and then turn into Pink Floyd. I'm random like that.

Okay... you wrote them as if they were performing the music. Whilst a nice practice (you did say it was for the WTG), it isn't much of a story (excusing the "It was a dream all along" thing).

I was expecting you taking the lyrics from the music and then molding them to fit the Equestrian universe (in which case I would've reprimanded you for taking such a rich lyrical song like Bohemian Rhapsody and turning it into a story using only 1,888 words when it should've been at least 18,880 words).

Not bad writing (on the contrary; it was quite good), but I didn't like... this. I was just expecting more. Thus, I will refrain from rating it.

1710980

Fair enough, my good man. Really, this was just my practice on creative writing. Specifically the more descriptive side. I'm already a fine storyteller already (if I do say so myself) so for the week in WTG, I just did some description practice and decided to reupload it here a year later.

Your lack of rating is understood and your review is appreciated :pinkiehappy:

1711036 Thank you for understanding.

I- ugh- I have the horrid habit of commenting, then remembering something, then editing my comment. Please give it another read.

1710951 Also, this makes me want to one of these of Billy the Mountain by Frank Zappa and The Mothers. Though, it's likely that I'm the only one on this whole website that knows what that is... If anyone else does, I'll give them twelve Spike mustaches. For an example on why this would be great, here are the lyrics. http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/frankzappa/billythemountain.html

In short, it's about a mountain (Billy) and his wife (Ethel), a tree growing off of his shoulder, from California. They one day get a royalty check, from all of the pictures taken of him. They decide to go on a vacation. They plan to go to New York, but they stop in Las Vegas first. At one point, they stop a Howard Johnsons to get some clams and coffee. They leave a path of destruction throughout the country, eventually leading to Studabaker Hawk getting called in. He's a super hero of the economic slum. He was born next to the frozen meat pies at Boney's Market. He also has an amazing dance. Anyway, Billy gets drafted into the army, but refuses to take a physical. So Studabaker Hawk comes down, with the help of cocksucking flies, and tries to force him to take it. Billy just laughs, causing Studabaker Hawk to fall off, falling 200 feet into the rubble below. If there's one thing Studabaker learned, it's that you don't buck with a mountain, no, you don't buck around.

Yes, that was in short. It's actually 24 minutes long, and amazing. If you want to hear it, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ywL3ZkpAhwc&feature=youtu.be Though it may not be done processing it yet, I just uploaded it two seconds ago. Scratch that, it's fully uploaded

1710906 I actually tried to read along with the stinking lyrics of the song!

1710885 I know an animator...if I talk to him, I might be able to convince him to animate such a video...wish me luck

You, sir, have just won the internet!!!

:pinkiegasp: i did one of these a while ago! This rocks!
:moustache:

Author My Boy, this is the awesome that all writers strive for. (God I can't believe that I just made that reference... X( )

I don't know what the heck that was but I liked it a lot

Inb4 featured.:rainbowkiss:

This reminds me of how much I enjoyed the graphic novel Freddie and Me by Mike Dawson.

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As a performer, I've always felt you experience a song (maybe it's different for listeners lol), and this song alludes to the idea that reality becomes so immense that it can be mistaken for fantasy (and vice versa, depending on your interpretation of the lyrics). I think this one-shot conveys this concept very well.

Now do another Queen Song. Like Who Wants to Live Forever or Under Pressure!

Ponyhemian Rhapsody not technically animated for the song but still pretty awesome.

I GOD DAMN FUCKING APPROVE

Props to you, sir. You certainly delivered.

This...this is glorious. May you be elevated on our shoulders and displayed to the world so that all may see your glory. Absolutely amazing, and I lol'd at the end. Have a like, fav, and moustachio. :moustache:

NOTICE HOW THIS HAS NO DISLIKES. IT IS TOO GOOD FOR SUCH PETTY OPINIONS.

This has a distinct lack of Freddie Mercury.
WHY IS THERE NO FREDDIE MERCURY?!?

Make another chapter where he descends from the heavens and blasts them away with his voice that even Luna cannot match in Power!

Have sum pics.

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As I was reading this, I played the actual song. It was so fitting XD
Well done. As the song was finishing up, I felt like this:
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Ummmm.....Ummmm.....

Wut just happened?:derpytongue2:

I...liked it? How did that happen?:unsuresweetie:

This is awesome. Freddie Mercury and Queen are (or were) the shit.

Actually playing Bohemian Rhapsody is also very fitting for this fic... :moustache:

How are you not featured yet?

You got a thumb before I even read it.

And now...

WHAT IF...

Twilight was the mare Pinkie killed? :pinkiegasp:

Also, you should really replace 'man' with 'mare.'

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Could this be? Ponies combined with the single greatest song ever made?!
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Faith in humanity
has been restored!

Queen is the shit! :yay:

Wow! I would just like to say thank you! I just put up an old story I wrote, and I didn't expect feedback near this. I may not be featured (yet. Fingers are crossed), but this is without a doubt my most popular story. Thank you all for such amazing feedback. You gave me one fantastic surprise.

Now for responses

1711110
Late response, but I wish you the best!

1711307
Well this was a one-shot I made a year ago, so maybe if I'm feeling an itch for Queen, I can bust out the keyboard again. No promises. But I do agree with you, being a performer and a fan of performances as well.

1711568
They'd probably be confused about a Human in Equestria. Not like the whole experience wasnt confusing enough.

1711858
Iunno

1712094
Dammit, you're right!

1712577

Freddie Mercury is no mere human!

1712577
This reminds me of another story I have read called 'How Ponyville ceased to exist'
Read it here
Anyway, it is a good song and having more then one story of it is just awesome.

-Ambassador or the Changelings,
Dopple Ganger

What awesome have I just witnessed? :derpyderp1:

1712577

There IS no confusing Freddie Mercury, even in Equestria. When you see him, you best step correct and give him the stage.

:facehoof: why didnt i see this coming?

Oh, my... That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what would be freddie mercury's pony name? the Mercury bit is easy, but the first part hmm.

something music terminology related, but to his style of music. which is hard cause he blended genre's so much.

Free Melody Mercury?

hmmm

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Free Melody, that works. No need for the Mercury. He can even keep the FM initials.

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