Rainbow Dash is the fastest flier in all of Equestria. She has performed sonic rainbooms, and even saved the lives of her beloved Wonder Bolts, but why, exactly, does she fly?
Rainbow Dash is the fastest flier in all of Equestria. She has performed sonic rainbooms, and even saved the lives of her beloved Wonder Bolts, but why, exactly, does she fly?
All credit to the song goes to derpidety
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Rough around the edges and rather mishmashed grammer. This story seems like a rough draft rather than a final print, but the story is actually a reel good idea in my opinion. I hope you don't mind my critisicm, but I do hope I can help if you want some......
why are so many people disliking this? it's a good story
1737473 Oh not at all. I appreciate any constructive criticism. I hope to get a little bit better at this1738006 was it something I wrote?
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1738099 I think you should write about Fluttershy