eeyup...awesome

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donr you wory I WILL READ IT ALL

This has to be a record for longest time in Ponyville w/o meeting Pinkie.

Keep going! More please

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Oh shit, that reminds me of the birthday special, how could you write such thing? (It was good but mostly disturbing)

thats... so... awsome
more please
i give you a 3.5 out of 5 for awsome
8 out of 10 as my rating

I love how many times you put things similar to "fucking great" I have never read an Anon story that has been this good, and it made me happy.

I think you should add a Comedy tag to this story. I'm laughing a ton during this. This is kind of how I'd expect someone to act and think if they ever found themselves in Equestria. Great job so far!

“You're not a pony." you both say.

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And now you have cancer

Hahahaahhaah, this is going great~!

Nice job dude, nice job.

"TWILIGHT!" spike groaned. "Do you have to bring that up, every time someone asks about me?" spike asked her.

Capitalization

Shouldn't he be dead being at the epicenter of the Sonic Rainboom or did Rainbow Dash magic protect him