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TheJokerAndTheThief


I'm here now, and i'm glad to be here. Hope you're glad to have me.

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I love Doctor Who, and i love FiM. I know this has been done so much, but maybe I can give you all something you'll like.

A grief-stricken 10th Doctor deals with his own mortality, but before he can continue with his own canon storyline, a PLOT DEVICE transports him to Ponyvile, and his body adapts via glorious regeneration! Time for wibbly-wobbly, timey-wimey!

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but before he can continue with his own cannon storyline

*Canon.

Reincarnation hut.

Maybe change the apple´s dialogue to reflect the accent like instead of myself you can use mahself it help us to get into character:ajsmug: apart from that looks pretty intresting :twilightsmile:

This looks interesting. Starting rather well, but, and pardon the expression, only time will tell.

Loosing? So he made it less tight instead of winning?

That was too much for me to keep on going. The grammar so-and-so in me just wouldn't let me. But still, it's an OK start.

Despite the grammar and capitalisation, I enjoyed this chapter.
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really good, :pinkiehappy:
but don’t forget the doctor is still regenerating he needs to breath out that regenerating gas
its the one thing everyone misses:derpytongue2:

Couple grammar errors, but other than that, color me interested.

That's a color, right?

THIS
IS A GOOD STORY
P.S.: how do i get a story editor?

"and i love" Please capitalize your self-referential pronouns.
"A grief stricken" Learn to use hyphens.
"cannon storyline" I love stories about cannons. This isn't one.
"wobbly, timey wimey!" Wobbly, timey-wimey what?

1696733 I fixed it for you :D Didn't know such things irk people so badly....

1698173 I wouldn't know, i just wrote that and then uploaded it. There's probably something about editors in the FAQ tab.

1700070

Thanks! Although not to be a bother but all the first half-dozen paragraphs or so still have loose instead of lose and loosing instead of losing.

But it's not as bad as my reaction to rouge vs rogue. :pinkiesick:

The rouge AI attacked without warning!

1700132
Fixed all of it. Just for you. And anyone else who found that annoying ^_^

1700761

Don't do it for me, do it for Grammar! Do it for Twilight Sparkle and uptight English Majors everywhere!

Do it for yourself! Imagine going to Equestria and ending up with all your time spent being lectured by Twilight about the etymology of lose and loose. :facehoof:

As Applejack will soon find out.

I have a few questions
1. Is this world a threat to the Atraxi?
2. Are the ponies of this world in any violation of the laws of the Atraxi?
3. Is this world protected?
4. Is this getting another chapter?

1706874
This should get another chapter relatively soon. Not exactly in the position to sit down and write a lot now, but i'm not going to abandon this.

Inclusion of Doctor Who-verse characters, events and groups is something i'm still giving a whole lot of consideration. There is a very specific story that i want to tell, but explaining it in the comments seems kinda pointless. Basically, i don't want to throw anything in the story i don't think it needs, especially in terms of DW mythology. Including the Atraxi would have a lot of implications that I don't know if i need just yet.

1708282
oh... you were referencing the first episode of season 5.....

*walks away into a corner, starts bashing head into wall*

I like it, you write a good Doctor. :) You're the only person I've seen describe Applejack's coat colour as 'golden', however. :twilightsheepish:

Still a few proofreading issues, but a fun first chapter. Shame it never continued.

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