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Discord and Chaos abound! He's my favorite character and I love to read peoples' different takes on his personality. Perhaps, one day, I may even try my own hand at writing ;D


Being transported to the magical land of Equestria is every Brony's dream, including mine. At least it would be under better circumstances. After a car crash I wake up, broken bones and all, as a species native to Equestria in Equestria. A dream-come-true, right? Maybe if I was a pony or gryphon. Hell, a human would be better than a draconequus. This might turn out to be a living nightmare if don't play my cards right.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 261 )

Well, we'll see where this goes

This is my first fic, and I set it up for more chapters because I hate myself XD
Constructive criticism greatly appreciated :D

Thanks for helping me learn a new word! I'd never even heard of the word furor before now.

Glad I could add to your vocabulary :3 I love that word


This seems interesting, I think I'll give it a read.

Edit: This actually pretty good, a few errors here and there, but nothing to be really concerned about. Honestly, I'm a bit excited to see where this goes!

This is very interesting. :pinkiehappy: You've got my attention.

Oh, cool. There aren't nearly enough female OCs. I mean, yeah we need to balance out the mane cast, but even then...

This seems promising. I do have some advice for you though: be careful how you handle the themes of the story. I've seen WAY too many fics like this go sour because the author was too heavy handed in their approach of the subject matter and strayed too far from the spirit of the show.

This looks very interesting. The only thing I would say is that you might want to work on you paragraphing in the beginning.

*also, that's not a joke... I seriously suck at chapter titles... any suggestions would be great ;D

Chapter title idea: Discords daughter? Idunno...

Aside from that, i like where this storys headed.

Hm, how about this for a title:

'I hurt my....everything'
'Huh, that's new'
'I be trippin' here'
'Don't do drugs, mmkay?'

That's all that I can scrounge up from my brain so far.

Anyway, good story so far, going to be interesting to see how things will go from here. Keep up the good work.

"Back in action"
"Griffin medical care"
"Intensive care unit"
"Congrats! now you are an alien"
"not completely dead"
"awake, alive and awkward"

hope to be useful ^^

Hmm, an interesting story you have here. I look forward to seeing where you'll take this. It's too early in the story to offer any real critiques aside from some minor grammatical things (you tend to forget the "r" at the end of "your" a lot), so I suppose for now I'll give you a track and a thumb while I await updates.

I'm personally a fan of chapter names like: Chapter 1, Chapter 2 and so on. All neat, tidy and completely boring.

Good story so far. Still way too few female protagonists on this site. And not many draconequii either (I think that's plural for draconequus, no idea).

"Alive, Kicking, and Not Human" perhaps?

Also, I'm surprised she didn't take note of her snout; you'd think such a radical shift in facial structure would be the first thing she'd notice. On the other hand, she is doped up on pain killers and in a fair amount of pain, so it does make sense for her to have other concerns.

As to her status as a draconequus, I'd imagine most critters would be suspicious and on edge around her and inclined to keep as much distance between her and Discord as possible. Not that she'd want to get too close to Discord; knowing him, he'd probably try to involve her in some crazy scheme while making weird, inappropriate passes at her.


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Doing pretty good so far in my opinion. :scootangel:

I really don't see why this doesn't have more likes and views, this is a great story. As for feedback... I did see some slightly repetitive sentences, but I'm too 'on a mobile device' too quote them. The only one I can remember off the top of my head is an overuse of "tender". Keep up the good work!

Oh, and congratz on taking my first comment outside of my own story. :raritywink:

cool I just noticed that you have no dislikes:pinkiehappy:

"Climax, climax, climax, no resolution story."
Yeah, that's my problem when writing. I either put too much action in and then have nowhere to go, or I don't put enough action in the beginning to interest the reader and I practically forget to build up the tension later. Oh well. I'd like to think we're all still learning to some degree. :ajsmug:

After racking my brain for a few minutes, I remembered happened;

Um... accidentally a verb here? :twilightsheepish: Perhaps "I remembered what happened" would be a little better. But, it's your call.

Not a 'Climaxslimaxslimax' story?!


; ;

I love you... PLEASE keep this a 'proper' story, and you will me as the most devoted fanboy you'll ever meet! I'll even get CLOSE to that creepy-stalker stage where I try to find out where you live, and what your address is and stuff! (Except for the part of actually finding that out. That would take actual work, and I'm WAY too lazy to do that kind of crap.)

2001100 2000896 Thanks for your input! Yeah, I really need to pre-read better :P I've realized that my biggest problem is re-using ONE word in a random chapter ... I have no clue why but I definitely need to work on it :applejackunsure:

2001274 Yes yes, I know there's at least 2 artists who have a Discord mirror named Eris, but I'm serious as hell when I say that this is coincidental, especially seeing as Eris is based mostly off of me... she has my hair color, style, and name (mah nickname's Eris :3 ) this is partially a self-insert :P But I think one of the main differences between my Eris and the others is that she's NOT Discord and will never BECOME Discord

Is there a reason for the 'gore' tag?

2005317 Not quite sure, honestly... possibly in the future :3 I probably need to take that off for now :twilightsmile:

I like this fic...MUST HAVE MOAR!!!!!!:flutterrage:

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!:derpytongue2:

I shall try my best!

I'm sorry that things aren't going very well for you, but I hope that you're able to get through them. Thank you for devoting your time to write up this great story. I'll admit that I have a bias against this sort of fic, but you've pulled it off excellently. You've built up tension quite well and I can't wait for the next installment.

Can't wait until Eris meets Discord, that'll be good. :trollestia:

Damn I hope so, too! This kind of distracts me and keeps me from going to make an appointment with the on-campus psychologists, so that's good for you I guess :pinkiecrazy:
I'm glad you're enjoying this, man! And what kind of bias, exactly?? :trixieshiftright:
Oooooh, neither can I *manically wrings hands*


Bias, what bias? :twilightsheepish:
(Note to self, do not offend the crazy person)


I really do enjoy a good HiE fic, which this fic is turning out to be, but I've always been wary of the whole "ponyfication" plot device. However, you avert the cliches that I might expect for this sort of premise.

crazy... Crazy? CRAZY?! lol, yeah, i'm just a wee-bit :rainbowkiss:

Oh, I so know that feel! To me, it's so unreal, which is partially what inspired this story. I'll try to not wind up falling into that stereotype :twilightsmile:

Awaiting the next chapter~ :pinkiehappy:

I haven't the slightest clue... I literally JUST noticed that I was one, thanks to your comment... o_o
*off to the interwebs to find out*

holy shi im one too.... :derpytongue2:

So you are!... I guess we're special :3

i realy hope this isnt a prank

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